All Comments on 'The Haunted House Ch. 01'

I not only like what you have done, but where you might be going. You have a very open-ended theme with tons of possibility. Please keep up the work

Very weird, but fun to read...

Should get interesting...

Very hot! I normally do not like Non-Human stories but the title caught my eye.

Please keep coming with more to this story!

I read all of your stories at greyarchive, are you adding new ones or just reposting the old?

I hope you are writing agian. I really loved them.

Very good story except for one thing. Bra size: the number is the measurement of the chest under the breasts, so a woman with a 44DD bra size would have a chest that was 44" around. That is fairly overweight, and not the picture you were going for. Next time, try a 34 or 36. Otherwise, very good.

Please tell me you are still writing! Loved this series!

I saw this story flying around and its my favorite ever :) thank you now I know who to thank and love :D

This story -- from beginning to end -- is among the finest pieces of erotic horror ever. Warning: a couple of scenes may be a bit disturbing, and a couple of scenes may leave the reader wishing the author had gone in a slightly different direction, but the leading comment remains true. If this doesn't put starch in your shorts, you're dead.

Think I might have found her.... Look out for Sophie Reade, Brit model.

Great stories, me and my gf always read a couple to get us in the mood!

Jennifer Marlowe is also a character played by Loni Anderson in the early 80's.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jennifer_Marlowe

She was a busty blond and would work well for "inspiration"

Love this! More stories like this

I don't like stories that refer to women as 'a fuck' or 'a slut'.

I understand calling her derogatory words. My ex used to love it at the right time.

This entire series is one of my all time favourite stories that I go back to again and again. Not terribly serious or intended to be taken seriously. But naughty fun. Wish the author would write more and hopefully is somewhere.

I loved it!!!