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Getting better but......
Your work is getting better but I think the shit was a little over the top..... Keep the stories coming I'm curious to see where you go from here.
grammer check it
Would have been better if the story didn't have so many fractured sentences and grammatical mistakes. . .
Piece of shit
Never write a story again. You killed grammar with this story. If this was printed out I wouldn't even use it to wipe my ass its that big a pile of shit.
Wow
OMG, that was funny, grammar needs a little help but umm yeah it was also sorta gross LOL
whoa
from a person who played the game yea it was tight u got ada's personality down to a T i liked it but the sperm thing is gross but diffrent i always thought zombies couldnt have sex until i started reading this all u need to do is work on grammar and grow
in time
when is ashely going to have sex with leon i always thought they were goin to get together becuz of all the stuff they been through
wtf?
THAT WAS FUCKING DISGUSTING DONT WRITE ANYMORE STORIES CAUSE THAT WAS SHIT
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