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Resident Evil 4 Ch. 03

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by MedicineMan04/26/06

Getting better but......

Your work is getting better but I think the shit was a little over the top..... Keep the stories coming I'm curious to see where you go from here.

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by Anonymous02/07/09

grammer check it

Would have been better if the story didn't have so many fractured sentences and grammatical mistakes. . .

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by Anonymous06/12/10

Piece of shit

Never write a story again. You killed grammar with this story. If this was printed out I wouldn't even use it to wipe my ass its that big a pile of shit.

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by Anonymous10/31/10

Wow

OMG, that was funny, grammar needs a little help but umm yeah it was also sorta gross LOL

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by rere1611/26/10

whoa

from a person who played the game yea it was tight u got ada's personality down to a T i liked it but the sperm thing is gross but diffrent i always thought zombies couldnt have sex until i started reading this all u need to do is work on grammar and grow

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by rere1611/26/10

in time

when is ashely going to have sex with leon i always thought they were goin to get together becuz of all the stuff they been through

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by Anonymous08/10/16

wtf?

THAT WAS FUCKING DISGUSTING DONT WRITE ANYMORE STORIES CAUSE THAT WAS SHIT

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