This story made my pecker rise and my tongue tingle. I gave you a 100 because that is as high as the score goes. Short and sweet and hotter than a FF FOX IN A FF. Dont forget the creampie for YOUR dessert. TKS for a good one. okdeacon
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Anonymous03/31/06
Couldn't get passed the single s.
The story was pretty bad, and, of course, calling a guy a barren area is just plain rude.
On a serious note, the story's barely readable. The misspellings and grammatical errors (the title is the first of many) aren't the faults of the moderators. It's not their responsibilty to make sure a story is readable. It's the writer's.
Seems like this story was simply written as something to be shared between the writer and that special someone. If that's the case, the mistakes are forgivable. Either way, I'll still give it a low rating, but the writer shouldn't worry about what we think.
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Anonymous04/04/06
Good try , I guess, but .....
...I'll just go out on a limp right now
and wager that this one doesn't make the
'top list'.
English
I Dont Care How You Spelled It.
This story made my pecker rise and my tongue tingle. I gave you a 100 because that is as high as the score goes. Short and sweet and hotter than a FF FOX IN A FF. Dont forget the creampie for YOUR dessert. TKS for a good one. okdeacon
Couldn't get passed the single s.
The story was pretty bad, and, of course, calling a guy a barren area is just plain rude.
On a serious note, the story's barely readable. The misspellings and grammatical errors (the title is the first of many) aren't the faults of the moderators. It's not their responsibilty to make sure a story is readable. It's the writer's.
Seems like this story was simply written as something to be shared between the writer and that special someone. If that's the case, the mistakes are forgivable. Either way, I'll still give it a low rating, but the writer shouldn't worry about what we think.
Good try , I guess, but .....
...I'll just go out on a limp right now
and wager that this one doesn't make the
'top list'.
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