All Comments on 'The Night Train to Paris'

I was wishing the train trip was a lot longer or you went into some detail about their stay in the hotel. At the very end she implies they did some anal fucking but I didn't see the details of that in the story.

The sex does NOT have to be gross or go on and on to be erotic. As an older man it was a wonderful "hope it would happen to me" story.

Nice little fantasy. Maybe he should try to get over to Paris more often.

... story with a wistful, romantic air to it. Though Frankfurt i not 10 hours away from Paris, surely?

This was classy--frank and yet restrained. Great (and unexpected) gymnast wager descriptions. Thanks for the story.

Erotic =) I enjoyed it.

Something I wish would happen to me :)

This story is a delight to read. A wonderful fall/spring romance with no lies or deceit to end in a great memory. I will be reading more of your stories.

Your stories have no originality. They are almost the same, even sharing many lines, verbatim. A 1 star is 1 star too many.

Would love to see another chapter where she decides to romance him. There is no sign of a spouse and so she gets a job in his publishing firm and wants to get married and have kids with him. She said she loved older men so a romance would be great.