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Excellent --- but too short
I was wishing the train trip was a lot longer or you went into some detail about their stay in the hotel. At the very end she implies they did some anal fucking but I didn't see the details of that in the story.
Nicely written
The sex does NOT have to be gross or go on and on to be erotic. As an older man it was a wonderful "hope it would happen to me" story.
Night Ride
Nice little fantasy. Maybe he should try to get over to Paris more often.
Beautiful...
... story with a wistful, romantic air to it. Though Frankfurt i not 10 hours away from Paris, surely?
nice train tale
This was classy--frank and yet restrained. Great (and unexpected) gymnast wager descriptions. Thanks for the story.
Cute
Erotic =) I enjoyed it.
Something I wish would happen to me :)
Well done!
This story is a delight to read. A wonderful fall/spring romance with no lies or deceit to end in a great memory. I will be reading more of your stories.
Your stories have no originality. They are almost the same, even sharing many lines, verbatim. A 1 star is 1 star too many.
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