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Intriguing - a fine beginning for a long and inter
Well thought out. It could be the beginning of a much longer piece. Generally I do not like inter-racial stories, but this is exceptionally rich in possibilities.
Please continue its development. You have stumbled on to a wonderful device, that of the client. By bringing clients into the story, you can go anywhere with this.
Do some follow-ups please!
Anon below does have a good point! Most law is not about law, truth and right, their idea could bring in an aspect that is missing. And all occasions for loving!
John
I LOVE IT!
Tell med there is more with these two! Write some more please!
you almost did it
but had to get the little RACIST comments in at the end; what have you got against non-whites? are you that insecure? maybe your bio is right and you are just a stupid redneck from florida who hates every different person and can't spell or use correct grammer for shit (but neither do i on these comments, tells you how important your drivel is)
Nice work Grey Eagle 286
I love the quick ending usually you have a longer ending in your stories like in Commander Murphys woman im a white guy and i love reading your stories they have alot of feeling in them and the characters tell there story with humour in them.
Pat
Good tale!
I enjoyed your story. Five Stars!
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