Ok the fact of the matter is, you have this set up as a lesbian sex fic. However, there is no sex in this fic, there is nothing alluding to it either. Just two women who are lesbians talking to each other and touching or hugging each other nothing more.
Another thing is you need to use a spell checker. When you say 'you can't sale your soul to your parents' in the writing. It should be 'you can't sell your soul to your parents'. Another mispelling is the word darnet it is darn it.
Please file this under the correct section and make spelling corrections. This should be filed under either non-erotic or romance.
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Anonymous03/29/09
wheres the sex?
this blew i thought this was a site for sex literature you suck at life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous07/07/12
Good Story!
Some fuckers just dont kno how to appreciate literature. And no shit it doesn't have sex! Anyways.... It very sweet and romantic! Cant wait to read more!!(: ♥♥
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Anonymous10/06/13
Great
I honestly enjoyed this story! It shows the reality of a relationship and not just the sex side of it. Please continue this story! :)
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Not a Lesbian Sex fic
Ok the fact of the matter is, you have this set up as a lesbian sex fic. However, there is no sex in this fic, there is nothing alluding to it either. Just two women who are lesbians talking to each other and touching or hugging each other nothing more.
Another thing is you need to use a spell checker. When you say 'you can't sale your soul to your parents' in the writing. It should be 'you can't sell your soul to your parents'. Another mispelling is the word darnet it is darn it.
Please file this under the correct section and make spelling corrections. This should be filed under either non-erotic or romance.
wheres the sex?
this blew i thought this was a site for sex literature you suck at life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good Story!
Some fuckers just dont kno how to appreciate literature. And no shit it doesn't have sex! Anyways.... It very sweet and romantic! Cant wait to read more!!(: ♥♥
Great
I honestly enjoyed this story! It shows the reality of a relationship and not just the sex side of it. Please continue this story! :)
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