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Great
I enjoyed your story.
Boyd
Another wonderful story...
You cought the emotions and nuances to tell the story.
Really good story
That was an excellent story. You have become one of my favorite authors on Literotica. Please continue writing.
An avid reader
A very touching romantic story.
A wonderful fantasy and even a little hope for some readers.
Thanks for the wonderful writing and story.
With great regard
Peggytwitty
You did it again !!!!
How do you do it? You continue to produce stories of the highest quality. This one pulled at the heartstrings of this 'old man'! Really the kind of happy ending I look for on LITEROTICA. Bravo! Pete.
Great love story
A real keeper!!! Wonderful story, expertly told, flawless execution. I will keep this in my file of special stuff and when I'm down in the dumps, I'll read this again and I know I'll have a smile on my lips...and maybe a tear or two on my cheeks.
i really
adored your story, it was loving and wonderfully well written and although for Literotica there wasn't much of a sex theme to it...the romance and simple pleasure was a refreshing loving touch...keep it up and as always thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
More than expected.
A wonderful piece.
Personally, I skipped through the nearly non-existant love scenes and moved onto the plot.
I applaude you for being able to get a lurker like myself to comment on a story here on Literotica.
Kudos yet again for wonderful work.
Keep it up.
Endearing story!
Mr. Hear,
What a lovely story, and so refreshing to read. You are indeed a talented Writer. One would have to wonder if this is from personal experience, or are you one of the really rare ones, who can make a story soooo believable. Best Wishes!
Read this one!
I was embarrassed by a fellow reader’s comment on this story, which reminded me that I have not paid my tribute to this very well deserving author for this gem of a story.
What happened, I was asking? Do people like me come to expect the best from DG, then when their expectations are met they sigh happily and quietly wait for the next story?
THIS IS A GREAT ROMANTIC STORY. Initially, presumably improbable, even in the eyes of the involved characters, until through the trials of life and good old chemistry the defenses and the weariness start melting together with your hearts.
Man, what is wrong with us that we respond so much more to the vicious and ugly aspects of human nature and go almost quietly with the beautiful ones? Start making it right by reading this story, and making your day a better one.
Depth, passion, integrity, charm...
Simply outstanding! Your portrayal of the children is particularly adept and charming. Stacy's personality reflects real life experiences. The story moves quickly, but pauses for special moments where depth of feeling makes it something extraordinary. There aren't enough stories like this... anywhere... ever! Thanks.
Outstanding
Yes it could happen, LOVED IT. Keep up the outstandin work.
The Waitress- A great story...
Really a sweet story, may be kind of far fetched, but that is why they call it fiction. Thanks, I have read it several times. it is a real cheer upper.
km-tx
An Excellent Tale....
Very well done. Covered all the relationship bases. The restraint shown by both main characters is what made this piece work for me. Loved the feeling of inclusion that reocurred throughout this story. Also loved the way their lives slowly melded together (like watching a broken bone mend). Dialogue seemed a bit stilted in spots, but this was one of your earlier submissions, so I gave it a pass. Overall, it was a very effective vehicle for conveying the healing taking place. -Mike-
Bullshit
A twenty five year old woman falls for a sixty year old man. Just think if they'd met fifteen years earlier he'd have been a pedophile.
Totally unbelievable. Fucking crap.
Well done
I read this before and came back to it. Kind of had to let it digest a bit. A well written tale that had enough realism to keep my attention. Some of the dialogue got a little stilted, but under the circumstances of the story I guess that sort of fits. Had I not known a couple of very similar ages who married and had twenty good years together I would have passed it off, but it does happen. Well done. Jerry
Great story - as usual!
I'm reading some of these for the second time. They are that good. I'm sure I'll be reading them again ... Thanks!
[Gualterio]
. . . how do you do it . . . AGAIN!!
H.
Second read ... one of my favorite DGH stories
Well-developed characters ... good plotting ... thoroughly enjoyable.
KEEP loving this story!
Some stories are simply timeless and few writers can pen them! This is one
A very sweet, wonderful story
I guess I'm a sucker for a good love story, and this is a good one! Good plot, good characters, all served up with good writing. Thank you for a really satisfying read!
Wonderful story
I really enjoyed reading this story. You really drew me into the characters, and I was so moved at the happy ending. I am looking forward to reading more of your excellent stories.
Story Opinion
Nearly all of your stories are outstanding. Keep up the good work.
Unexpected but Welcome
This is one of your best. I'm not into the warm and fuzzy stuff...normally. Yet, this story connects at some indefinable level. Kudos on this one.
Excellent
this was one of the best stories i've read; i enjoyed this one in particular because charlie's personality is similar to mine. excellent work
Nice story
Very nicely done. Happy endings are nice. There's not enough nice in the world. let's hope the world gets better.
Brilliant
Just a brilliant story and a wonderful ending, well done.
It is a good life -
And none too likely -
BUT absolutely possible - the idea is too valid to deny - for any haters - eat shit LOL-
really good story
A really good love story 5 stars plus--going into my favorites list
Ron cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
fantasy story
probably your most fantasy filled story with the age difference, cop cars as moving vehicles, etc. A nice read but too farfetched.
A RAINBOW IN THE PROJECTS
and the pot is not gold TK U MLJ LV NV
The Way It Should Be
Hey everyone deserves to be happy and it looks like the ,4 of them Will be happy for a long time and I bet Ben &Marti may have a new sister or brother. I thing a tost is in order and I would really like to read a follow up story about them.
In my favorites 5 stars plus
Ron. Texas
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
Good story, happy ending
Good, well thought out story, about the tragedies of life. If you want porn look some where else, this is good, real life stuff.
Nice one.
@Bullshit:
It’s funny you should say “Totally unbelievable.” To you maybe, because apparently you’ve never seen it happen, and if you haven’t seen it, then it *can’t* happen. I say it’s funny because it *did* happen in *my* family—a grandfather married a woman two generations younger than himself. All you revealed with your insulting, in-your-face comment is that you’re young or inexperienced; probably both. The author, on the other hand, has more than six decades under his belt and most certainly has seen more of life than you.
@DG HEAR:
While there’s all kinds of room for editing and polishing, your story is a gem. Let’s call it a diamond in the rough. I was perfectly happy with the lack of focus on sex; it is, after all, in the romance category. It’s the first story of yours that I’ve read, and it sounds like I’ll enjoy the rest. It’s a sweet, feel-good tale that I’m really glad to have found it. Thank you.
Barry
a wonderful discussion of a very important subject
Based on the comments there are some young readers who may find themselves looking back in a few years, surprised to find out that people over 30 can also have a healthy sex life. Meanwhile they will just have to work it out for themselves as they slip into their senior years.
I really like the simplicity of the Tags For This Story
love - marriage
; )
You made an old biker cry
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