The last line is awesome. Way to stay true. Maybe could use a little more description of the girl. Loved the story otherwise.
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Anonymous02/28/06
Really Hot
Really hot; great story; I would love more detail in the sex scenes
More along these lines please
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Anonymous03/01/06
The ending breaks out of the genre nicely.
Compact, yet suggestive, well-paced first story. Hope to see more from the author soon. There seems to be a lot of talent here.
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Anonymous04/14/06
only one suggestion
Your writing is wonderful, almost exactly what I had hoped. If I could make one tiny difference it would be that he would make her his slave and let her earn her grade that way :P
I thought it was one of the hottest stories i've read, and i will favorite it.
I think though that everything could have gone on longer. the tease and the sex. I also would like more detailed descriptions of the girl and everything else.
This was an amazing story that was so hot and sexy. Thank you for sharing.
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Anonymous06/20/11
hah
I love it keep writting
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Anonymous06/20/11
woooow
The writing was great.I especially love the whole tricking her part i mean, get her to suck u then fuck u all for extra credit only to tell her that you don't give it.Crazy story man.It was wicked
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Anonymous07/16/11
Proff read what you write
You wrote you riped off her buttons they flew ever where but as she leaves she buttons up her shirt Were you kind enough to sew them back on If so it makes up for you being a low life pervert.
English
great ending
The last line is awesome. Way to stay true. Maybe could use a little more description of the girl. Loved the story otherwise.
Really Hot
Really hot; great story; I would love more detail in the sex scenes
More along these lines please
The ending breaks out of the genre nicely.
Compact, yet suggestive, well-paced first story. Hope to see more from the author soon. There seems to be a lot of talent here.
only one suggestion
Your writing is wonderful, almost exactly what I had hoped. If I could make one tiny difference it would be that he would make her his slave and let her earn her grade that way :P
pretty ok
the best part was the last line.
heh.
I thought it was one of the hottest stories i've read, and i will favorite it.
I think though that everything could have gone on longer. the tease and the sex. I also would like more detailed descriptions of the girl and everything else.
Sir
I want a master just like you.
Wow!
This was an amazing story that was so hot and sexy. Thank you for sharing.
hah
I love it keep writting
woooow
The writing was great.I especially love the whole tricking her part i mean, get her to suck u then fuck u all for extra credit only to tell her that you don't give it.Crazy story man.It was wicked
Proff read what you write
You wrote you riped off her buttons they flew ever where but as she leaves she buttons up her shirt Were you kind enough to sew them back on If so it makes up for you being a low life pervert.
oh my god
This is my fantasy. I have always dreamed of teachers fucking me and fucking me so well I turn into a whore. Very well done!
perfect..
Wow! That's one of my fantasies... Uhm, I think I'm going to call my boyfriend and tellhm to come fuck the shit out of me.
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