All Comments on 'A Curious Roommate'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Interesting!

I'm hooked here. So far this has started out to be more than just a cherry busting story. I'm interested to see where you take this next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Developing well

I hope his first release hasn't cured things and that there's time for her to get on top of the problem!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
wow!

Great story...it would be cool if she got addicted to getting facials! you made me come!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice!

That was an awesome story..Can't wait to read the rest!

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
A first time for everything

Nicely written, nicely paced - and you've actually spent time building up the characters, which really adds to the impact. As others have written, look forward to Ch.02.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Thin Calves?

If she has thin calves, she didn't do much track and field...or at least not well. :P

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