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Why ask if she had the nannycam tape?
Wasn't she playing it for him? Love your stories Bob
This one was intense!
Boy did those two assholes deserve what they got!
A powerful, emotional story--thank goodness you let the two victims get some payback!
ohio
Every blue moon I like your Slut Wife stories
And this was one of them.
-Risq
(^_^)
Loved it. NOW That's what a husband with a
cheating wife should do. Get revenge and burn her ass.
I think this is your best!
He did forget to remind her about her "Lorena Bobbit" attitude.
Good, job. DJ
Best
This is your best for a long time.
Excellent Short Story!
You got all of the elements for an outstanding story. Thanks!
SleeplessinMD
when you 're good,you're good
good fun story with consequences.
Well Done
Good story, I enjoyed it. My thanks to JPB
Damn good
Well they almost kept it all in the family. Great story
Thank you
greqat work
best in ages ...more lol
Loved it....except the title
A well written story.
But as Bob's series of stories has evolved they are no longer "Becoming a slut wife:"
How about renaming the series "Revenge is sweet:"
How How How
Can one man have so many pens? bobie you amaze me!
You can find a road to consequence that no one else could conceive or deliver so brilliantly and concisely.
How entertaining of you! In this theme of consequence you have few peers when it strikes you - which I hope is more often for this larger more appreciative audience!
Thanks Author - with Higher Regard
Great Story Bob
Great story...Keep up the great writing!
You really did good....again
You know how to put a good angle on a story. Keep it up!!
Enjoyed It!!!
Makes up for the "Sarah" drivel on the other site....6 chapters of tripe....even you must have been disappointed ....but you just couldn't throw it away..eh! too much time was invested is that it?
Good
Very good story I enjoy your writting
Another great one.
I loved the story!!
More of the same please.
I do have to say though, Baily was getting revenge on her cheating husband, BUT this guy actually was cheating on his wife BEFORE he knew that she had cheated on him.
I guess it doesn't matter anymore since he and Baily really wanted to hook up anyhow and obviously Baily's husband and Bev already had.
I loved this story though Bob, thanks for your efforts.
Charleybear
Thank you!
Thank you for dedicating some of your talent to those readers who prefer the more traditional LOVING WIVES stories. You can always keep with your more kinky staff as long as you allow us to enjoy the great fun which your stories can give!
What a revoltin developement this is
He's been fighting Bailey off all this time and his wife is a slut. The video Bailey showed him would be one hell of a shock to me, I dunno how Bob felt. Pretty calm man.
That little twist I wasn't expecting.
Good story.
Sweet Justice!!!
I loved this story! Great character development considering the length, and great buildup! Bev came across as real as it can get! As a "wanton wife", but as the story unfolded it came clear that her flirting was all in fun.
"Revenge is a dish, best eaten cold". Shakespeare knew of that which he did speak. And you have "paraphrased" this perfectly!
The apocalypse cometh
What the f'ing f is this? No gangbangs, JPB? Sacrilege! No 12" black cocks? Heresy! :D
Great cheating spouses story. Thanks.
love your stories
Love your stories, I may not always agree with you but they are real good stories. I got to looking and the only ones that get good marks on a constant basis are the incest ones. No matter how good the Loving wives stories are they get busted. This is true no matter who the author is, male or female. So sense i have not seen anything new from you in awhile i reread
Some of your older ones and decided to put my comments on this one for all loving wives stories.
Thank you for entertaining us and please add a new story to the mix. Mike from Texas
love thy brother in law
bev did, and she and brother in law are entering another phase of their lives.
1st LIAR DOESNT HAVE A CHANCE
only to be exposed. TK U MLJ LV NV
Aaahhhh! Don't ya just love it!
Thanks for making my day...Again.
Good Story as Always
I'm not really into the shaming or revenge, but you always manage to write a good story.
Well Pened as Usual...
JPB you are the by far the most prolific writer on Literotica I don't know from where you get the variety of plots; if it is from experience you must have a very interesting if not exhausting life style.
What can I say about this story that hasn't already been said of hundreds of others that you have pened? Characters well defined and simpatico, even though the cheaters are made out to severely underestimate Bailey.
Bailey is very well portrayed as she did her best to rebuild her life with Brian by forgiving his first adventure but she was a realist and watched every step her husband made and kept those cams in place.
The biggest surprise was the introduction of Bev I suppose because you basically kept her hidden during the story.
Well written, well plotted and a fair retribution by Bailey who was so well prepared that she even had her revenge in place and it certainly wasn't over the top as most revenge stories are. Thank you for sharing and please keep them coming
as usual
a JPB UNFINISHED SYM-P0HNY.
3 stars for the effort though.
Well that was interesting.
Basically swapping partners. What's next?
@Anonymous 11/14/15
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Basically swapping partners. What's next?
Well at least he will be getting better blowjobs.
Will it last?
Maybe, maybe not..........but that's true with most relationships and any hook-up.
So
It was OK for bailey to forgive the piece of shit she was married to and keep her brother in law in the dark?.
Bailey was every much the same kind of scum the 2 cheaters were but the dipshit protagonist could only think with his dick.
American intellect and morality at its finest
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