by wilderness
I've just finished reading all 14 chapters & am in awe of your talent, the story & etc., etc., etc. Please say this isn't the end of the story. Can there be a chpater 15, please?!? Keep up the great work!!
I would have loved all of it and would have rated the story a 100. But, every so often you showed him as having some sort of self-doubt or as having some kind of indecision which caused an unnecessary emotional gap in their relationship. Each occurrence on his part seemed so contrived and totally uncalled for...causing some kind of damage to her each time either physically or emotionally. What the hell was that all about? You show him as a real and dependable man for most of the story then as a self-doubting wimp every so often to muck it up? It was a great romantic story without those weak and unbelievable moments!
I have to agree with the previous post, Bill was kind of a whimp. So he got a divorce, it was years ago. God damn, grow a set and move on. A couple of months, fine, but years is to much. Anyway, I guess it's just fiction, and well written at that. I just couldn't get into him as a character.
Really enjoyed the story. Thanks...
I waited till the end to comment, it was absolutely fabulous! You have a unique gift for story telling that makes this easily one of the best stories i have read on here, well done!
I thoroughly enjoyed the story. There were a few instances where I thought they were over, but as in life, people can be complicated. To deal with a traumatized person, there has to be may emotional mood swings, fears, nightmares. Glad you brought them back together for a happy ending!
Thanks for Writing!
bloody good read.
thank you
i have been captivated by the plot, a good passage
your characters. bloody interesting. thank you once again
will read more of your stuff
please keep writing
cheers
I agree with Anonymous's comments. Great story and I am going to your others! 👏👏