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Neighbors Ch. 01

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by zhounder02/26/06

Nicely written...

I loved the story and the way you teased the young man. I would liek to read more about how he uses the pool too. I would like to also read more about the sex but this was a great tease... in many ways! :)

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by Anonymous02/26/06

very eroctic, slow build

agree with the other comment. loved the way you took your time slowly and eroticly building up. would have loved to continue in a much detail when they get together at the end. but i suppose you could really explore that more in the cuming chapter(s).

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by markRI02/27/06

thanks for reposting

thanks for reposting this story. I'd lost it on Nifty. The second chapter with Jason's brother Jeremy is hot also even if it does involve shaving. LOL

Hope you'll be submitting more

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by jakeonthebox02/28/06

Thanks Guys

I'm not trying to pad my own score, I just wanted to reply.

I am glad you liked it... ch. 2 is up and ch. 3 is pending approval. I tend to write more about the buildup than the actual event.

Thanks guys!

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by Anonymous03/06/07

great anatomy lesson

luv the young hunky vulnerable male bodies being explored by men in dominant positions. the writer shows a real knowledge of the man bod--how it gets turned on, what about a young man turns on an older one.

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by Anonymous05/10/10

If I had a parent that was that disturbed and faggoty I would call children's services and then tell his boss and co-workers what he did. That should be sufficient enough to fuck up his life.

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by Anonymous09/09/12

Cheesy

This was cheesier than Velveeta. It wasn't sexy at all.

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