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master
The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story -sensuality is the key- and in my mind can picture the characters and setting.I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting
Excellent....
and enjoyable...hope you continue this series it is very good so far. thank you for sharing. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Mesmerizing...
I can't waity for more! Keep posting new installments!
Bring it on!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter,so many possibilities.
Thanks for the great read.
Brilliant!
Brilliant first time!!! Thanks for the great read, I would love to read more installments
Awsome
I loved it I want to read more. When is the next chapter coming out?
MORE MORE MORE
I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapters. If there would a book out there, I will get it this moment.
Oh!
How I regret reading this, didn't know that this is the only chapter I'll ever get :'-(
Chapter Two
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I like your writing style and while the plot seems to be predictable, the characters are well developed, and since I live in SC I'm interested in what comes next. I also noticed you didn't mention the race of George. Maybe his ethnic group should be understood, but I believe that piece of information is important.
More??
I would love to see where you're going with this story...
This is a super fantastic beginning! I hope you write more sometime. :)
Regret this Story has been Left Unfinished
Your departure for now ten years from the writing of this story is very disappointing as you are quite a talented author. Have enjoyed this small glimpse of your craft and can only hope that nothing unfortunate has happened with you.
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