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Lord and Master Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/01/06

master

The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story -sensuality is the key- and in my mind can picture the characters and setting.I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting

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by txrosenaynay03/01/06

Excellent....

and enjoyable...hope you continue this series it is very good so far. thank you for sharing. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

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by Anonymous03/01/06

Mesmerizing...

I can't waity for more! Keep posting new installments!

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by Anonymous03/02/06

Bring it on!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter,so many possibilities.
Thanks for the great read.

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by Anonymous03/22/06

Brilliant!

Brilliant first time!!! Thanks for the great read, I would love to read more installments

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by Anonymous06/25/06

Awsome

I loved it I want to read more. When is the next chapter coming out?

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by Anonymous07/23/06

MORE MORE MORE

I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapters. If there would a book out there, I will get it this moment.

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by Anonymous03/04/08

Oh!

How I regret reading this, didn't know that this is the only chapter I'll ever get :'-(

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by mitchawa07/14/10

Chapter Two

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I like your writing style and while the plot seems to be predictable, the characters are well developed, and since I live in SC I'm interested in what comes next. I also noticed you didn't mention the race of George. Maybe his ethnic group should be understood, but I believe that piece of information is important.

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by Anonymous11/09/11

More??

I would love to see where you're going with this story...

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by Anonymous11/27/11

This is a super fantastic beginning! I hope you write more sometime. :)

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by Horseman6804/05/16

Regret this Story has been Left Unfinished

Your departure for now ten years from the writing of this story is very disappointing as you are quite a talented author. Have enjoyed this small glimpse of your craft and can only hope that nothing unfortunate has happened with you.

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