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infidelity
the inspirational temptation of poetic words
Complex, fascinating and
the imagery is unique and compelling. I have a feeling that the complexity of this poem will cause many to overlook or dismiss it. But I would urge everyone to read it regardless of whether they are concerned about their ability to deal with complex poetry or not. The imagery alone is compelling and exciting - whether you truly grasp the meaning (which of course, is self evident from the poem title), this is on par and due to the very different genre, as powerful as f-cynr's carnac series.
Searing
I felt this.
you must have been burned ...
quite badly - you've managed to capture the bleakness - I wonder, did you ever forgive? or was that it?
Powerful and evocative
I have never before felt this way, never before experienced the emotional state so powerfully and evocatively described. I'd never understood it when people tried to describe it, but now... now I think I finally get it. And I hope I never get any closer than this.
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