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Great final chapter!
Thank you for finishing this story. I loved it although I know many readers probably don't like the bi-sexual sex it is well writtten. It is not unusual these days for men to stray toward other men and you described Richard's feelings and struggles very well. Katrina found out what she had become even though she really knew all along. She just couldn't resist cock. A good story with a good ending. I enjoy your other works immensely particularly your current series "And Mother Makes Four" keep writing!
Tres bien merci! Well done thank you!
I know I had been after you to write another chapter and I amglad you did and concluded the story the way you did. I loved the continuous path that Katrina and Richard took finding their sexuality. I am not into the gay scene but I did enjoy reading that part as well. Katrina is not unlike a woman I work with and she is very erotic and sexually active. I read about Katrina and I visualize her in that role. I like the way you include French expressions in the dialogue from time to time during orgasms. Well done!
A fine ending to a fine story !!!!
I normally don't go for the 'gay' scene but I found the adventures of Katrina and Richard to be most enjoyable. Richard finally gave in to his homosexual desires while Katrina pursued an enjoyable and lucrative career whoring for the benefit of her University. Who can blame them? A logical and happy ending to a great series Walterio - well done.
By the way, Ch.14 of "And Mother Makes Four" is overdue, LOL!
sad they were not open
Just sad that Richard and Katrina were not fully open with each other. I expected the adventure to bring them together not tear them apart. If their friendship was strong, then why not stay as a couple that fucks other people? Much more civilised! I enjoyed this, though at times got tired of the lengthy anatomical stuff and wanted more development of feelings and relationships. When Richard was getting jealous of Brandy that rung so true that I wanted to see more linking of the emotions to the eroticism. Keep it up and bring in your experiences - ignore the Philistines who object: there will always BE Philistines!!!
How many died of AIDS in the writing of this story
Thanks to the Anony from the UK I now know the definition of Philistine, one who does not agree with your misguided thoughts of life. OW I guess the whole world is populated with Philistines. The story would be nice but I really do hate to hear of people with suicide wishes fucking around without a care just waiting to get AIDS or some other very terminal disease. Erotic is erotic, stupidity is trash.
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