All Comments on 'My First Threesome'

Real good start!

Had me wanking for sure....nice to read FFM for a change.

I don't know if your story was real . . . but you made it sound very real. I loved it!

great job. i had my jeans around my ankles.

Definitely waiting for #3. Love your writting style.

What a great story. Fun and exciting. Both of the women seemed real. You have captured all three of your charcters. There has to be at least 4 more chapters here. I am looking forward to reading them.

Traveller

great story, keep it going.

...SO predictable.

Leave writing to writers, or at least people with an imagination!

omg awsome story would love for you to email me that pic

a hot story, hardly a yawner ... well written and descriptive - remedy

Chloe, you are so damn sexy! Love reading your stories and dreaming of your experiences. Keep on writing! Hey, make your fortune in erotica and forget the chemistry!...Rick

Keep the stories coming (and us cumming)!

Please.

I would love to share the two of you...

Love it love it love it!! Perfect amount of speaking and description of what was going on, love what was actually going on. Part II indeed!!!