All Comments on 'before i leave, a word'

the way you say things, make me look at the world and others. you always show me that my thoughts and feelings are not wrong or soley just mine. I'm glad you are back and posting.. missed you, mojo-cat!

xoxo

maria

you leave your exit line

hanging in the air

like a tablecloth pulled free

while the plates and glasses

barely move

and you are gone

before their meaning even register

where is our breathe?

we seem to have lost it,

waiting for the other shoe

Payback still brings no joy.

This person has his very own ~ sweet lecturer. Could it be his wife?

Yes! I love the way your poems are structured.

Five stars.

leaves bitter scars and hidden agendas, TK U MLJ LV NV