All Comments on 'Reluctant Wife Trap'

It's really good and interesting, just go aheadand post part 2

Enjoyed part 1! Post part 2 soon!

post soon

the entire story. But if part 2 is as good as part 1 you'll geta 5 from me! Good story s far but i still can't understand why a man would want a very handsome man with a bigger cock to fuck his wife. he might loose her eventually if she liked it to much. And she sure seemed to lik eit. I wonder if that's what part 2 is about. Good luck man.

Hot, great, thanks. Please continue............

Please write #2

Helps me with MY wife!

Husband says he wants her to fuck willingly, then he drugs her and gets someone to help seduce her when drunk. That is not willingly. That kind of dishonesty is a great way to get a divorce.

The story is well written but the premise sucks. He doeesn't respect his own wife!

Sick so called husband and no man

I want my husband to read this one. I think I'll leave it up on the computer...... hmmmmmmmmmm

Julia

part 2 please

Hot story Sportventure; Let me say go ahead and post #2 for #1 is a hit. A lot more of us than you can guess like for their ladies get some extra cock. I like your story. Those who do not just dont experience one of the hottest sexy things around. Wives who do also like it and they deserve the same freedom as most men feel they have. OK ?55555555555 okdeacon

Where is a woman's moth. IE (The camera on Carols face showed her eyes were closed, her moth was open I had the same trouble trying to find a woman's yet. That's right..I heard a news report about some woman being shot..they reported that they had not gotten the bullet out of her yet.

What she needs is a divorce lawyer with a criminal law partner so that her husband who had her raped and probably plans to put the tape on the Internet with copies to her family if she does not repeat the session go go from Divorce court to jail.

I did not see anything about safe sex so she just had sex with Steve and everyone Steve has had sex with and everyone they have had sex with.

Lets not forget Steve sex with a woman after having her drunk and not able to say no is first degree rape for him.

Let me guess for part 2; she feels guilty over breaking her marriage vows and takes pills or drives into a tree leaving an "innocent" "loving" husband ready to get someone more in line with his swinging.

I never leave a comment but this is GOOD! Part 2 please. Ignor those "Do gooders" they don't have to read it.

Did something similiar with the wife and she loved it too.

It was to be just a massage but once he got started she liked it all, including his 6x 2 cock. I knew she liked it when he called for a second massage and she said yes.

good for you two. Don't listen to the dick heads who don't enjoy your story.

If you want to whore your wife out to bigger cocks then at least tell what you are doing - if you can't sell it then gather what little self respect you might have left and leave her for some sorid little hole in the ground in which to grow old.

The little kids loved this - the self cuckolding sicko's loved your wimpet pimping her out for rape on tape they hope!

So should you write a followup - why certainly why stop a stupid action at this point with a bonus that she will soon realize she could get a new pimp that she can respect - then its pink fuzzy slippers and apron to watch dumb shit - sexy huh.

Number 1: I don't believe that most husbands want to see their husbands have sex with another guy. Just in fantasy stories. Number 2: The husband spent several years trying to rub away his wife's morals so that he could watch another cock (oops, another man) fuck her. He finally gets her drunk and arranges to have another cock fuck her. What true love! What crap!

Great story. Ignore those that provided unappreciative comments...but I bet deep inside they liked it enough that when you post the next part(s) they'll make a point to read it. Can't please everyone.

A fun story. Ignore those self-righteous up-tight guys who wish they could let go. The story had a good plot, but it would be much better if it could build tension better by going a little more slowly. You have to admit, that the wife who resisted for years made a nearly instantaneous, out of character reversal. It would be better if you could rewrite that with some shred of prior interest on her part.

Dont make waiting long.SEND SECOND PART FAST

Loved it, would really like to see a part 2. Gave it a 4 because it could have been a bit longer & more detailed on the action but still great.

Can't wait to see where the $100 leads.

Only dissapointing thing was you used all that slippery oil but there was no anal!

You are a sick motherfucker.

The guy who says most husbands don't want to see thier wife fucked by another guy...hasn't been married long. After my wife got royally fuck by a 21 yr old college stud we had the greatest sex for months. Now she wants to do him and a friend......and video tape it.

I have to admit I have thought about doing that with my wife. Don't know if I could go through with it though.I think a lot of men think about it. can't wait for part 2.

Good read, well written and yes I'd love to do the same to my wife. To those who don't like the topic, don't read it.

this is a great story i cant wait for the second part

Loved hearing about your wife getting hosed. I love watching my wife, Marianne, take big cocks until it makes her scream. Marianne uses every part of her body to get guys off. Post here if you'd like to know more.

great story, well written. definately a fantasy of mine to see my wife fucked by another man. Please follow up with part 2........

I loved your story and look forwards to the next. With only slight modification I can see doing this to my wife.

Thanks!

Can't wait to read the next episode!

I can't satisfy my wife either.

Great story. Don't listen to the negative comments, write another.

I tried to interest my wife into fucking someone else. pornography made it sound so good. She was never interested but used my fantasy to tease me during sex, asking me who she should fuck, suggesting men she liked. "Would you like me to fuck Mike?" but this gradually changed. The question would be, "How do you know Mike didn't already fuck me before you got home?" "What if I like it and don't want to stop?" "Mike's cock is so much bigger than yours." Etcetera. I finally discovered her two year affair with Mike when I caught them together and watched them (they didn't know)make uninhibited and energetic love for 2 solid hours. I have never been so jealous in my life. But I involuntarily climaxed at least 4 times. And his cock was thicker and longer than my 6 inches. I don't know whether I loved it or hated it but I had a very hard time handling it. But the sexual excitement was incredible. I can't make love to her now without the visual images flooding my mind and bringing me to a climax. They gave each other so much pleasure and her pussy swallowed his oversized cock so easily. And she liked his cum...on her tongue, in her anus, in her pussy over and over again until I was a whipped dog. So prepare yourself for a shock. Good luck.

Throbbing first. Please pen the sequel.

Your story was hot and had me on the edge of my seat... so to speak. Please, continue to Part 2.

I read the first paragraph or two and that is all. I am so glad this is fiction. I do have to ask the writer why he wrote a story about wanting to see other men fuck his wife when she is such a beauty according to you. Is it because you want to cover up your infidelity, you have a kinky fetish, or is it because you think so less of women that you will have them perform such degrading acts? Maybe it makes you feel more of a man than you are, by bringing down another person to your level? I am sure I am not the only person that would like an answer.

great story keep writing

great story keep writing

Sorry, but I just couldn't get past the spelling errors. Just during the introduction Steve has broken up with his 'finance' and the husband has called the hotel room next 'store'. I'm afraid since I'm reading it these types of things really ruin the flow. I pass no judgement on the story but you need tighter editing so pedants like me can get to it.

keep writing

I really hope that you will continue with this story,and I enjoyed reading about your crafty subduction.I think the husband will do well if he gets her to realize that what happened to her was the best sex that she ever had.Your story was fun to read,the sex was very vivid. The chacters were realistic. You have a hot story line going,please keep writing,I want to know more what you have planned for her in the fantasy that you have in your head

Another pervert story, which is getting to be the norm on literotica, lately.

The Ct. Yankee

Thanks. The story is exciting, not to everyone, but to me, and to many men who are aroused by thinking of their wife having sex with another guy. Wow, what a turn-on! On to the sequels!

I'd love to setup my wife like that.

My way was hiring a handsome, hung, male stripper for her 40th birthday

party. He was half her age and hit on her when she walked him to the door after his performance. Kissed her and told her she couldn't be 40. He asked to have"coffee" sometime and she handed him her business card. Two weeks later, at our vacation home, he fucked her brains out for over two hours. In the past 4 years, she has had four other "men" half her age and still looks no more than 30! For all you men who make negative comments regarding this practice, let me tell you that you are missing out on the LUSTY sex we men who allow wives freedom have.

Happy husband in Oregon

This is a great story..please post #2. I'd love to set my wife up like this. Thanks for the great hard on I have..

I like the story but of course I like loving wives stories. I am continually amazed as the idiots that post condemning the genre of hot wife stories. If such stories are soooooooo bad and show such a lack of respect for women then why are these bozos reading them in the first place? "Honey, I really love and respect you but I am going to read porn on the Internet that objectifies women." Is that what they tell their wives/significant others or is their significant other one of their hands?

Keep writing.

I realy loved this story, it has given me lots of ideas. I will definitely use this story to set up my wife. Please send part 2 asap

Love the story! I'd love to try this on my wife..

I am a cab driver/motel manager and have seen first hand a lot of these incidents where ultimately the husband is the loser.

Some comments have decried drugging and raping Sweetie! I read about her willingly drinking 4 servings of wine, apparently more than her usual amount, but not a massive amount, and certainly NOT forced down her gullet! Likewise, I do NOT see rape by Steve! However, I do believe Steve's 'seduction' was NOT convincing, even with that amount of wine and a tenting towel! If it did happen, I think it was LESS Steve's seduction and MORE Sweetie's opportunism (in other words, she saw a chance to do something she wanted to do without Hubby finding out!

4*

i can imagine the way his moist finger pressing and digging the glistening skin of the wife...

I have set up similar opportunities for my wife to let loose and fuck a large cock.

The first time she was like your wife, not having sex- just allowing a massage.

I'll have to write and let you know how that worked out. Hint--She smiled all week after. He has a large cock.

Don't sweat what the ass holes say about us letting our wives have some fun while we watch. Play boy did a survey years ago and 50 per cent of the responders admitted they would like to see their wives taken by a larger cock. As to losing a wife to someone else because she gets fucked by someone else. That happens even if we don't watch. So either you have a great marriage or you don't. Either you respect each other and can play with others or you don't and it won't matter.

THe massage scene is easier for them to let something happen and they are showing off their curves which we know they like to do.

Hope all is well with you two. You can read a bout some of our adventures at this site.

Olsalt.

,While this is a common fantasy for a lot of men, the story was just silly. Erotica needs to make sense in the real world to be effective. Keep trying!

Is this shithead for real ??

Loved It!!! Can't wait for Chapter II, Web site would not let me vote BUT! I'll give it a 5

cuck shit.

Just love they way this written

I am known as EroticWriter and I re-posted this story on two sites called Slutwives and also DarkWanderer. I also added a photograph that depicts the action described and fits into the narrative perfectly.

I gave the author, sportventure writing credit and informed the readers that I also added to the story, enhancing it to a degree. I normally write my own stories, many based on personal experience, but I especially like what Sportventure did with this one. The version depicted here though needs to be broken down into more paragraphs for easier reading.

Very well done very erotic and sensual taming the shrew. The seduction and story line was good maybe could have prolonged with descriptive adjectives for heightened eroticism. Waiting for sequel......

Some mothers do have em

Loved the introduction and the plot. The husband had to come up with a good ruse to get his wife to cooperate with his plan. The plan was set and all was going according to plan. His wife soon became a willing participant. A slut is born.

Silly, implausible, LW fantasy story. No value at all.

Your husbands are still despicable characters.

I would want my wife to take his cum so I could return for dinner.

you misspelled "no"

i did not like the story much. It was another cuck husband story. Carol switched from a shy and timid woman to a cum-loving whore in minutes. Not very believable. What is this with these husbands who need another man to fuck their wife.?

Henry... No one NEEDS it. It is a very common fantasy. So being so fucking judgement.

Perfect Hot Wife

Beautiful!

All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly.

Great story!!! 5 stars. I can't wait to read the next chapter. My wife read it and really liked it also. It took me about six years to open my wife to my fantasy. We usually go to a hotel bar once a month. She is successful 80% of the time. The only problem is most men don't want me to watch so she goes up to the guy's room alone. But I do have sloppy seconds with her every time. The feel and smell of another man on her is such a turn on. And watching my wife get in the elevator with him and the wait is so exciting.