All Comments on 'My First Time'

by cutecoed05

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Goood!

I can relate with your writing as I had a similiar experience.

Keep writing!

pixie2002pixie2002about 18 years ago
A very sweet story

So real . . . it took me back many years. Thank you for sharing this special experience.

DarkrSideDarkrSideabout 18 years ago
very nicely written

Very realistic. Very sweet. I liked it alot. I look forward to more stories from you :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
verrrry hot story

GREAT STORY,MY COCK GOT SO HARD WHILE I WAS READING IT.WRITE MORE,I KNOW YOU CAN..KEEP THE STORIES CUMMING.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
CRAZZYY

fuckin crazyyy!!!!!!!

that was good

Sandman8314Sandman8314over 9 years ago
NICE

What a sweet story. All the more charming, knowing it's a true story.

Some of your later adventures are less so, but this first story is just lovely.

In the "Goodnight" story, when you say:

"I thought about what he said for a moment and then I smiled at him cloyingly and winked. "

I hope you meant "coyly."

I'm a tad disappointed you didn't stay with James, but that's the way life goes more often than not.

I like you both as a character and as a writer.

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