Thank you for the story. As a young guy, I'm generally uncomfortable with sex stories about older women... This however was so well written that if I weren't in love with my girlfriend I might have considered her... maybe. The only older woman I've ever known was a pro (legal in my country) when I was very young. Okay I'm only 24 so some would still call me young. Anyway, your story touched me. Thanks
I love this well written short story. The only thing that I felt a sense of frustration is it's length is too short. I especially enjoy to read May-December erotica like this. I hope that you would publish a good novel(a long piece)discribing May-December relationship like some hot friend's mom's stories. I willingly will buy your work through kindle in Amazon or any other thing & recommend also to my friends who are seeking awesome erotica.
your fan from half the globe away.
A bit mysterious but hot. It drew me in as if I was there. Good stuff.
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Anonymous11/02/15
Perceptive and true
A wonderful vignette that captures the tension and potential heart ache in a relationship between young and not so young. A tension beautifully described and so familiar. I like to think I was more sensitive to it as the younger man but I accept that it may have made little difference. Ultimately perhaps, there is no escaping the heart ache.
Thank you for such evocative writing.
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Beautiful writing
Thank you for the story. As a young guy, I'm generally uncomfortable with sex stories about older women... This however was so well written that if I weren't in love with my girlfriend I might have considered her... maybe. The only older woman I've ever known was a pro (legal in my country) when I was very young. Okay I'm only 24 so some would still call me young. Anyway, your story touched me. Thanks
WOW!
Just WOW!
Thank you
Damn...
This is one red hot story! I think it particularly spoke to me because I tend to lust after older women. ;)
Loved it
It is great to read a well written story and not have to use spell checker to correct some gramatical error.
Congratulations
heartbreaking ...
and a great reminder for me not to go there again, no matter how amazingly hot the boys can be.
You are truly an excellent writer!
I love this well written short story. The only thing that I felt a sense of frustration is it's length is too short. I especially enjoy to read May-December erotica like this. I hope that you would publish a good novel(a long piece)discribing May-December relationship like some hot friend's mom's stories. I willingly will buy your work through kindle in Amazon or any other thing & recommend also to my friends who are seeking awesome erotica.
your fan from half the globe away.
Fascinating sexual vignette
A bit mysterious but hot. It drew me in as if I was there. Good stuff.
Perceptive and true
A wonderful vignette that captures the tension and potential heart ache in a relationship between young and not so young. A tension beautifully described and so familiar. I like to think I was more sensitive to it as the younger man but I accept that it may have made little difference. Ultimately perhaps, there is no escaping the heart ache.
Thank you for such evocative writing.
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