by MrFantasyMan
Well done! Such romantic and erotic imagery - wonderfully alluring!
Must get to the travel agents to book a secluded beach holiday!
Intoxicating is right!!
Very good MrF loved it!
Just a wonderfully worded poem....
~Honey
to a womens heart is wrapped up in these lovely words
Wow, this moved me. I loved the flow of it. It had a tidal rhythm, very smooth.