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by bobocity03/07/06

No dialogue at all -- Interesting

This is pretty good stuff. I'm not sure I like the whole no-dialogue thing, but I understand that you chose to write it that way, and did a pretty good job of it.

Nice.

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by Anonymous03/08/06

Great Story

Hi Sarah, You did a great job! This was an awesome story.

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by CopyCarver03/08/06

Distinctive Approach & Well Executed

I have no idea whether this was an experiment with alternative style, or is your style of choice. Either way, it's well done.

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