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Great start?
At least, I hope there is more. Otherwise the ending is premature.
We have two people who obviously have deep feelings for each other but are they just temporary? Will it continue? Will she leave Seattle?
Does Kurt kill him when he finds out Grant was not a "gentleman"? He was only supposed to have dinner and maybe a drink with her. I mean, with Grant's reputation Kurt might not want him messing with Kelly's emotions.
Will the author tell us about Grant's metamorphosis into a suitor rather than a sexual predator? And how about Kelly? She may decide that her HS infatuation is over now. And then what? Grant could be serious and she could be cavalier. Relationships are really difficult, aren't they?
Great start!
What a great start...I do hope there is more though! Don't leave a broken ending please!!!
GREAT
Thanks for the great read,I really get pulled into the story; one of the best character development I've read.
Loving It
I really hope there is a few more chapters left in this story.
So, where is the next chapter?
Like the rest of your readers, we're waiting!
More, more, MORE!!!
Please continue this one, it has some great possibilities. Your writting is wonderful in all areas, character development, situations, sex. Keep 'em comming.
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