I hope that you continue this story. I really appreciate the way that there's been no sex yet. I think it's going be much better for the waiting. It seems to be a wonderful romance if Zack and Terri can be adults and not sexmaniacs who just do the do and have nothing substantial to fall back on.
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Anonymous03/09/06
I hate
Waiting!!!! We all would love to read more of this story.
I feel sort of weird about leaving feedback for a piece that's unfinished, but I thought I'd better since I'm here on literotica so rarely! Very nicely written - I like this girl a lot, she's got soul. He's lovely, too, and I especially liked the way he was so taken with Terri that he didn't even notice Holly's, um, assets. =) It's rare to find things in the interracial field that are written so tastefully, with such feeling. I'll definitely keep checking back for more from you. ~Rose
If only she were Terri. But, then again, if Terri did something like that, she would find herself on her back behind the counter about 5 seconds later.
I am loving this story and can't wait to finish all of your submissions.
English
Keep Going!
I LOVE THESE TWO PLEASE DON'T KEEP ME WAITING!
Absolutely wonderful
I hope that you continue this story. I really appreciate the way that there's been no sex yet. I think it's going be much better for the waiting. It seems to be a wonderful romance if Zack and Terri can be adults and not sexmaniacs who just do the do and have nothing substantial to fall back on.
I hate
Waiting!!!! We all would love to read more of this story.
next please
Loved the story can't wait to read more!
omg what took so long
lol great thread keep up the good work
Very Sweet
I feel sort of weird about leaving feedback for a piece that's unfinished, but I thought I'd better since I'm here on literotica so rarely! Very nicely written - I like this girl a lot, she's got soul. He's lovely, too, and I especially liked the way he was so taken with Terri that he didn't even notice Holly's, um, assets. =) It's rare to find things in the interracial field that are written so tastefully, with such feeling. I'll definitely keep checking back for more from you. ~Rose
ahh, so good
I totally loved this line:
If only she were Terri. But, then again, if Terri did something like that, she would find herself on her back behind the counter about 5 seconds later.
I am loving this story and can't wait to finish all of your submissions.
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