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another bout of realism in fantasy...
"Come on, angel," he whispered, "Let go."
Just lovely, that line!
I like, too the sensory descriptives- his "mouth tasted of liquor and cigarette smoke" is so evocative.
And of course, that voice...
heheheh...
I know I had already read it once... but it was great to read again.. made me giggle. Very tasty. *grins* And pun is most certainly intended. Great job Jett.
Wow!
Can I give a second shout-out for this line?
"Come on, angel," he whispered, "Let go."
Yum yum yummy yum yum! Loved it, MissJett!
Temptation
Sizzling hot, Jett! Loved every single detail! Whoo-hoo!
From "Temptation":
Rusted brandy in a diamond glass
Everything is made from dreams
Time is made from honey slow and sweet
Only the fools know what it means
Temptation, temptation, temptation
Oh, temptation, temptation, I can't resist
Love Tom Waits
I got introduced to "Swordfish Trombone" in 1988-89 by a guy I worked with named Bill Baker. It's a stunning album (including the classic "Frank's Wild Years" narrative piece).
Well done, MJ.
John
"Never could stand that dog, anyway."
Made me shiver
which must be good. Your use of imagery was exceptional.
that was delicious, delightful a hand and a glove, a perfect match!
Wow that was hot! I sure love teasing a woman to orgasm, glad she also took care of you too! Oh thats right this was a story, so much the better!
Simply Outstanding !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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