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Safe sex?
Well DG, I think that this is the first time that I have had the honor of being the first to comment on a new DGHear story. What can I say? A real gem of a tale with just the right degree of eroticism and brute force to leave us asking for more about the martial arts expert named Jeff and the librarian by the name of Lydia. We know that the main characters are stereotypes but have to love them and wish them a future full of lustful loving! Well done DG, full marks - no suggestions for improvement - to me it was again perfect!
Wow! different from you
I see the name DG Hear and I have to read it. No matter what the catagory it's in. Another well written story. Still don't know how you do it.
An avid reader and an avid fan of DG.
Neat
Something a little different from DG which shows he has the talent to tell a good story in many different genres. My thanks to the author for a good read.
Well done
As always a good read.
I adore exhibitionism. I found it erotic but a little matter of fact and not real sensual, though a good read
With respect
DG Hear
Thought I'd try something a little different. The comments are positive but the voting is the lowest of any story I ever wrote. Kind of mixed signals. Thank you for reading my stories and sending in your feedback and comments.
DG Hear
finaly
a not wimp white guy
your violent banter smacks of the wanna-be Marine.
1. You always capitalize the "M" in Marine. Anyone who does not is a poseur.
2. Given number 1, I think your story is 100% armchair fantasy. Anyone kicking ass like you do with a military/martial-arts background would be convicted of ADW.
3. Given number 1, I doubt the existence of Lydia. Do you have a pic?
4. Sincerely yours, MSgt(Ret)Mark, 1`st Ranger Bn, 10th SF
Sexy & Sweet
Great story! I liked the perspective you wrote from and your description of Lydia. Sweet ending, quite romantic.
Love love love
I love anything to do with fat, puffy cunts being played with! Please write more about swollen puffy pussy lips.
Martial arts is all BS
Any martial artist worth his salt will never try kicks above the waist in a bar or street fight. Too easy to have his feet caught or have his other leg swept in the meantime. You should talk to a real martial artist before trying to right about one that's never been defeated, more BS - any martial artist has had fights they have lost. Your writing is fair, just research your violence more before you make up another superhero.
cheap thrilly
stop hiding and hanging with the girl and defeat will happen ! the G men knew this at a very early sighting or you 1
Certainly different
So many stories of this type have the guy get his girl to fuck other people as well (just like her sleazy ex wanted). Full marks for not going that route.
Could be better
All of the karate and tough guy stuff ruined this repeatedly. Story could have been so good. Not realistic i couldn't get into it because of it.
my ex liked to show off
her muff by not wearing nickers when out shopping...sje also liked to piss by the roadside facing traffic...it was fun as she never involved others....look but not touch...
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