All Comments on 'Ghetto Fairy Tales Ch. 1'

I grew up in Brooklyn and Queens and I have seen a lot of similar situations that turned out much worse, but things like this do happen.

This reads like a Shakesphere play...It is poetry, I loved it...

Just a very good story... and a very sad one.

This story had my dick throbbing,keep up the good work....

Dang Black, I wish it was a part 2 too this. This story was great I loved it. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading... Peace an luv! :)

Better than Eric Jerome dickey and Carl weber

Rarely does erotica capture a human experience in a way that feels hyper-real. This really captures the characters motivations and emotions, with no unnecessary clutter. It was gritty and terrifyingly hot.

Very well written (except for the numerous typos, but even these feel "organic" to the story and the storyteller).

Very good story line. Complete from beginning to end.

Feels realistic while reading it, unlike most of the "plastic" stories here.

Really enjoyed the emotions of both parties shown so well.

I disagree with other comments about part 2. It wouldn't feel complete or realistic if it had a continuation.

Would be nice to know what happened to Angel, but that's just pure curiosity on my part.