All Comments on 'Newfound Love Ch. 02'

I love these two but this was way too short. Keep going please!

I do like your slow buildup and story development. It's well told. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Nice building up. We're all anticipating what will eventually happen. Good chapter and keep it up!

Over all i love the story, - there shouid be more romantic interracial stories about couples & falling in love.

One damn emotional skinned knee and they are ready to throw the baby out with the bathwater. What the hell is that about guys? Sure, it's only fiction; but I'm sensing some deeper truths. Anyone care to challenge this?

...the buildup you're doing, although I'm quite surprised you've only done 1 page per the last 2 chapters. What you have is good, and I'm glad you're willing to take your time on the details.