is fucking everything in sight ... hope he is fucking at least 20 times a day like i do ...his wife will sure miss his big cock when she has to settle for the little black ones and the very wittle white ones of her boss and hubbys boss... and oh what will they do when theyhave to work for her hubby as he will own both their companies...and he will be fucking their wives with his so much bigger cock ....they might have to resort to fucking each other .. we can call it brian does dave just be fore dave deepthroats brian..i like it now thats a great story line
by
Anonymous03/10/06
this getting old now
do something to bring it to a close.let the hubby find out and get revenge on all or just wimp him out.it not funny or sexy anymore.
by
Anonymous03/10/06
this getting old now
do something to bring it to a close.let the hubby find out and get revenge on all or just wimp him out.it not funny or sexy anymore.
by
Anonymous03/10/06
It needs an end.
After 4 parts of the same thing it just might be time to bring hubby into the story. By now we all know she's a slut that really hasn't given two thoughts about her husband I am curious to see how you bring her husband into the story.
i hope hubby take dave daughter and use and abuse her and see how he likes that.sue brain and dave companies.move and have a ball with their money, that how you fuck assholes.
For the love of god lets see the ending. I can't speak for others, but I can say that anyone that would do this to her husband isn't going to be well liked by most, even if the sex is basiclly pretty intense. But I mean if she's going to cheat on him for months I'd rather not see several months worth of cheating printed out blow by blow (^_^)
Somehow this feels like it will either go: "Hubby reallys is in to watching his wife sleep with other men" or "He'll huff and puff about it, but in the end he'll let her keep doing it long as she doesn't leave him."
Your story and your ending of course, but for the love of god lets see that ending. Maybe you could tell everyone how many chapters you put in this.
I mean if there are 10 chapters of this, I'd rather come back and read them all at once instead of reading about 4 chapters that are basiclly the same thing.
Good story bob but its not going forward. where are you heading with this?
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Anonymous03/10/06
Actually Might be the only one
I don't think you need to end this yet. I've always wondered what would happen if you kept going with a "Becoming..." story and I'm definately enjoying it so far. Hopefully, there's more to come.
to write about. I guess you could just call it a writers slump. All you are doing now is rehashing over some bad, mundane, sex scenes. It's down to either shit or get off the pot. I usually look forward to your writings but I am afraid, and I know there are lot's of others who feel the same, you are loosing me.
Yep, this could have been a modestly good story about 2 chapters back. I agree that now you are just rehashing SSDD we have seen in many of your stories. Time to wrap this this up as usual with hubby coming home finding out, eating creampie and limp dicking his way on through life. You have some real writing ability in there somewhere and why you waste it doing this same old shit all the time is way beyound me.
Regards,
Chagrined.
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Anonymous03/10/06
thank you
thank you for another very entertaining story Mr. Bob
"Brain rang the doorbell at five to six and as she went to answer it she told herself, "Be firm, be nice about it, but be firm."
When the bedside phone rang at eight o'clock she took her mouth off Brian's cock and rolled over to answer it. Brian grabbed her arm and said to let it ring."
That's such a great segue, it's a little too sudden later when the daughter comes by, but I love that first one.
English
hope her hubby
is fucking everything in sight ... hope he is fucking at least 20 times a day like i do ...his wife will sure miss his big cock when she has to settle for the little black ones and the very wittle white ones of her boss and hubbys boss... and oh what will they do when theyhave to work for her hubby as he will own both their companies...and he will be fucking their wives with his so much bigger cock ....they might have to resort to fucking each other .. we can call it brian does dave just be fore dave deepthroats brian..i like it now thats a great story line
this getting old now
do something to bring it to a close.let the hubby find out and get revenge on all or just wimp him out.it not funny or sexy anymore.
this getting old now
do something to bring it to a close.let the hubby find out and get revenge on all or just wimp him out.it not funny or sexy anymore.
It needs an end.
After 4 parts of the same thing it just might be time to bring hubby into the story. By now we all know she's a slut that really hasn't given two thoughts about her husband I am curious to see how you bring her husband into the story.
Boy--Does this story stink--
Like fish--Should be frozen--Like old frozen fish, should be tossed out un-eaten.
I agree with all the commnets.
Just Plain Stupid.
i hope the hubby fucks dave daughter
i hope hubby take dave daughter and use and abuse her and see how he likes that.sue brain and dave companies.move and have a ball with their money, that how you fuck assholes.
Not like you to run on like this
She's a slut and now seems to be running the show. Give us the JPB twist and torment.
The writing is still good.
Thanks Pervert
I never thought I'd say this but,
For the love of god lets see the ending. I can't speak for others, but I can say that anyone that would do this to her husband isn't going to be well liked by most, even if the sex is basiclly pretty intense. But I mean if she's going to cheat on him for months I'd rather not see several months worth of cheating printed out blow by blow (^_^)
Somehow this feels like it will either go: "Hubby reallys is in to watching his wife sleep with other men" or "He'll huff and puff about it, but in the end he'll let her keep doing it long as she doesn't leave him."
Your story and your ending of course, but for the love of god lets see that ending. Maybe you could tell everyone how many chapters you put in this.
I mean if there are 10 chapters of this, I'd rather come back and read them all at once instead of reading about 4 chapters that are basiclly the same thing.
Good story
Good story bob but its not going forward. where are you heading with this?
Actually Might be the only one
I don't think you need to end this yet. I've always wondered what would happen if you kept going with a "Becoming..." story and I'm definately enjoying it so far. Hopefully, there's more to come.
This is Bobby's 227th story
I'll reserve comment on the quality
Bob I think you are just lost for something
to write about. I guess you could just call it a writers slump. All you are doing now is rehashing over some bad, mundane, sex scenes. It's down to either shit or get off the pot. I usually look forward to your writings but I am afraid, and I know there are lot's of others who feel the same, you are loosing me.
Making it unanimous.....
Yep, this could have been a modestly good story about 2 chapters back. I agree that now you are just rehashing SSDD we have seen in many of your stories. Time to wrap this this up as usual with hubby coming home finding out, eating creampie and limp dicking his way on through life. You have some real writing ability in there somewhere and why you waste it doing this same old shit all the time is way beyound me.
Regards,
Chagrined.
thank you
thank you for another very entertaining story Mr. Bob
Make it as long as you want dude.
"Brain rang the doorbell at five to six and as she went to answer it she told herself, "Be firm, be nice about it, but be firm."
When the bedside phone rang at eight o'clock she took her mouth off Brian's cock and rolled over to answer it. Brian grabbed her arm and said to let it ring."
That's such a great segue, it's a little too sudden later when the daughter comes by, but I love that first one.
A cold hearted bitch that deserves to get burned.
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