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YEAH, THANKS FOR THE EDITTING!!!! SUCH AS IT WAS!!!!
Thanks to Blackshang and Cloudy for editing and impression reading. If it weren't for your efforts I would have published an error-filled first draft posing as a completed and competently edited story. OOPS On closer review, I believe that this comment is thoroughly inaccurate as evidenced by:
one-to-subtle (none-too-subtle)
states (States)
one's claves (calves)
arm rests (armrests)
book case (bookcase)
safe like (safe-like)
forth button (fourth)
Button (button)
Dragon's (dragon's)
electric magnets (electromagnets)
Question (question)
grand kid (grandkids)
noaccounts (no-accounts)
Paris Island (Parris Island)
Pelilu (Palau) (2)
wanted to met (meet)
god (God)
mind bending (mind-bending)
world shattering (world-shattering)
out strokes (outstrokes) (2)
down strokes (downstrokes) (3)
chaffing (chafing)
mean spirited (meanspirited)
Ignore the anonymous crap
Typically I don't like reluctance themed stories, but you did a very good job. The people that feel the need to post anonymous bullshit comments, are typically mean-spirited people that are lucky to put more than a few words together.
Sweet
That plot twist with gramps was unexpected. Excellent writing!
I wish this setup actually existed.
I wish it really existed and I could use it.
I Wish This Was Real!
One of my big fantasies brought to life. I do some vigorous roleplaying with an older gentleman who is a father figure to me. No, I was very young when my father died, but I have been drawn to older men since my teen years. He helps me bring to life some of my secret fantasies; but double penetration, gangbangs, or pulling trains are not in our capability ...yet. This story blew my mind.
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