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Good start!
Despite the misspellings and omitted words here and there, good overall plot setup and characters.. can't wait to read more!
Its been a couple of years it looks like since you have been on here. It is a shame if this story is never finished. I liked it so far!
Please
I really wish you would continue with this
There are many typos and the name of your female main character is inconsistent.
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