All Comments on 'A Trail of Roses'

Nothing like a whole day of foreplay to setup a perfect evening. The creativity with which he expresses his love and devotion is enough to melt your heart. While possessing an element of the unknown, we can be certain that your writing will deliver. Of course, as always, another home run! It's a joy to read pieces with correct spelling, punctuation, and word usage. Please, do keep writing.

A Beautiful Story!

A nice build up and conclusion for a story.