All Comments on 'Losing My Ryhme'

Losing his rhyme

Can feel so fine

That a man will love to do

Open verse incessantly.

cute Arty really good!

and you do them so well...blue

not only interesting rhyming but also neat alliteration. well done.

wso

I love the changes Art. You sprucingly

spiced this one up !! I love the rythm

and the imagery. Hot, and a bit deep

in places too. Keep'm coming,

for I see nothing wrong

with a bit of rhyme droppin' ~

Thinkin' I am gonna steal your muse

and have me a field day !!

*flowers* lol

in this one and a smooth read......nice work.....don

Your poems are alway so evocative.

Thank you for sharing them with us.