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Secondhand Slave Store

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/10/06

$60 a month is $720 year

3 years makes it $2160. And of this 2160 you go into an auction with $1000. Hope your slaves can add and subtract for you.

If $60 is all you can put aside, believe me you will not be able to feed , dress and take care of 2 additional adults to your household.

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by Anonymous01/27/09

Finish please!!

What a dumb a-- why did you not finish the damn story?.

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by Anonymous03/22/13

Go to school!

You can't comment clearly if you don't know grammar. Learn to spell and the proper us of words!

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by Anonymous11/12/17

meh.

Decent concept; very poor execution. Needs work with punctuation, capitalization (so many random things were capitalized that I couldn't help but snicker), and consistent tone. Keep practicing, and you'll improve.

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