All Comments on 'Secondhand Slave Store'

by robertpaullocke

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
$60 a month is $720 year

3 years makes it $2160. And of this 2160 you go into an auction with $1000. Hope your slaves can add and subtract for you.

If $60 is all you can put aside, believe me you will not be able to feed , dress and take care of 2 additional adults to your household.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Finish please!!

What a dumb a-- why did you not finish the damn story?.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Go to school!

You can't comment clearly if you don't know grammar. Learn to spell and the proper us of words!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
meh.

Decent concept; very poor execution. Needs work with punctuation, capitalization (so many random things were capitalized that I couldn't help but snicker), and consistent tone. Keep practicing, and you'll improve.

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