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by vampiredust03/07/06

Great

Loved this poem, very upbeat.

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by My Erotic Trail03/07/06

derailed

I like your train of thought

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by LeBroz03/08/06

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That's the spirit ~
Live life and don't slow down,
Else how will you live to a hundred and fifty?

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by 03/08/06

Is good

Hey.. you're coming along nicely in your poetry skills. I like the metaphor in this and how you stayed clear of cliches. Nice work!

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