All Comments on 'Mystery Fuck'

A shitty story posted by an idiot that can't even spell. I couldn't finish this crap due to the many mistakes.

Pretty fair, not deserving of one recent excessively negative comment.

An editor could help there, but it's still a pretty good story.

Everytime i read "my massive cock" then it grows another inch, I get an irresistable urge to Zero out a story. But I will be kind.

...imagine us readers. What the fuck happened. Who is Ash and what does he have to do with the story.

You need an editor to tell you all these things BEFORE you post a story.

I hope you've learned the Literotica art of ignoring the Anonymous comments. If they are too big a wuss to sign their critique and enter a discourse, they don't deserve your respect. I liked your read, it was a good idea.

Not too difficult. Nice twist at the end to reveal to the reader who the mystery player was. I could have stood a little less penis growth and a little more about the narrator's relationship with his wife. Not a lot, mind you, one of the attractions of the story is its economy of language.