impact...hits one with goose bumps...moving images made contact with verse..nicely done/blue
No shame in feelings, love or want.
Go with it, awesome pen here ~
Text and art meld nicely in this. The pain is felt all the way over here.
Words and illustration well integrated. Magical words ~ poignant and delicate - make this rendering meaningful.
Well, with that it'll take more than a little bandage to fix the hurt.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.
I love the overall look of this piece.
subscribes. TK U MLJ LV NV
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