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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/08/06

*Hmmm ~

I wasss a bit confused. I read this
so many differ ways, THEN it was so
... simple.
I love it. The title ... perfect !!

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by vampiredust03/08/06

Love it

Loved this lil poem of yours, that last line was pretty darn good

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by LeBroz03/08/06

~~

No genius?
Perhaps, but it's his lower brain
That makes things ...
Interesting

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by My Erotic Trail03/08/06

excellent

penetrating idea I enjoyed your witty write (~_~)

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by dcpoet4403/09/06

cute.......

and definitely multiplexed. that poor shaft with no wits....*LOL*......don

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U03/26/06

cute...

very good little write!
so many thoughts evoked and directions to take it all in!
;)
leave us thinking and working!
good job blue...
~LB~

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