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Double Elimination

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/13/06

Great story!

Bulls eye great story! I don't have a smoking fetish but think it is hot when a great looking lady smokes. I do think it is very sexy that she had long nails, had you tied down and was getting paid to take pictures by a website! Great idea!

Hope all the readers are treated to several more chapters.

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by Anonymous06/27/06

Explanation of Fetish

Nice syntax. It would be nice if you explained in the story why the character felt had his fetishes, rather than just letting him have them. However, this literotica group is usually not interested in the reasons behind the actions. They're just interested in the actions. Shame, because I think they're missing out.
-slimv

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by Anonymous11/24/08

quirky little piece!!

Imaginative! Different!! Good work!!
Lush

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