The Wimp

Well that certainly was different!

I guess with his teeth knocked out, the warm up blow job should be pretty nice. LOL

4 Warped People Including the Writer

Writer you are slipping again - this wasn't worthy of my time or yours in retrospect.

Whats next? Something rational and arousing we hope!

A lesson to be learned

Anonymous was probably aghast that Bob took no prisoners. I'm afeer'd the poor soul has never been in a real dust-up, and his/her (?) sensibilties were hurt. In my younger days I very quickly learned the first rule of law: Destroy or be destroyed! I even learned the the second law: When you've done the job properly hurt him so bad he'll cross the street when he sees you coming. Ain't bragging 'cause them days are long gone (thank God), but that's the fact of life when you live in a man's world, you're young and dumb, and there's too damn few women to tame us.

Non-Erotic

Post it properly what was erotic about this although i liked that the husband wasn't a real wussy

dump the bitch

so she just gets off on publicly humilating her husband, what happens when she finally picks a good big man instead of an oaf. a woman who does not love respect her man to suport him in public doesn't deserve to be with him.

Bullshit

When you write a shitty story you go overboard. You can really be a dumb fuck. When will you learn the difference between lose and loose? You are a true asshole for posting this crap.

hard as marriage is today who need this shit

why ask for trouble in your marriage by exposing your wife to this bullshit.both sound like childred with a new toy.

Pimp and Whore intense beating of John

Absolutely this is not erotic. Author is having some fun but didn’t come across as fun to this reader.
It started like it would be sensual and then turned into a husband and wife sick game of depraved and intense infliction of pain. This is just a back alley mugging of an unsuspecting John set up by the Whore and her Pimp.
Not a very good story by this Author. His writing is normally quite good.

WHAT?

This was about as erotic as watching paint dry

You know if Peggy gives it a bad review.......

.....then there is something definatly wrong here.

I can count the number of bad reviews by her on one hand. She almost *never* gives out a bad review. Its like she can't help herself. Yet she did today. While I can't say I agree with all of her opinions, I have noticed no matter how bad I though it was she still found "something" positive about it to write a good review about.

Makes you think doesn't it (^_^)

Interesting

Liked the story even without some real fucking. It's good to see the little guy win. It did need some hot sex between the husband and wife though.

DOODE!

no telling what a little guy ould do to win a fight. Need some sex other then that it was funny as hell. they should go on an ass kicking and fucking spree. they find a big dude make him think he can beat the husband and take the wife nd then turn the tables. have the little scrapper turn the big motherfucker into his bicth.
Good shot though

The husband is a wimp

This is a stupid story.

In the real world a fight between a 139 pounder and a 340 pounder is no contest. Only in the writters imagination could this ever happen.

In the real world the husband would be getting the guy ready to fuck his wife.

He is supposed to keep his promise to his wife but she does what ever she wants.

He was uncomfortable and she promised if either were they would leave. She broke her promise wanting to be fucked by the biggest cock the husband has ever seen.

The husband is atleast bi. nobody else would agree to suck another man's cock if he lost a naked wrestling match.

Disapponiting used plot.

Ken

Poor

Bit dumb, too. Some little shit likes to beat up people, the sweet wife likes to watch him do it?

Sure.

In the real world, he got squashed, the wife got raped, or they both got thrown out into the street before anything happened.

Great Story

After all the downers you read on this site this one was perfect. Thanks Grey

Standard Plot standard spelling

Wow, this group of readers has not already had you taken out and shot?

You have your standard hero figure, who is never the biggest, baddest man in the area reach his point of enough and stomp a much bigger dumb bad guy. If someone did not see this coming, they have not read more than 2 of your straight stories.

I would have thought, that by now, the local cops have a sheet on this guy who destroys the big dumb types that think all muscle and physically biggest entitles them to do whatever they want. After the police reports and hospital reports on several "self-defense fights they would probably see that the fights are not self-defense but provoked and "the wimp" would end up in civil court, at least with the rest of his lifetime income going to pay off court judgements, since he has the physical skills, & probably martial arts ratings and continues the fights past normal reason and taking his foe out. His wife was not raped, beaten, drugged, etc., and the words spoken are not sufficient provoation for the response, he would be in jail.

I'm not going to raise my bp complaining about your spelling, by this time I know it is deliberate or you are a little too dense (RE CON) to have anyone check it.

Very good story

God might have made men unequal by making some of them big and tall and some short and small but he made all men equal when it comes to how much they can be hurt by a knee in the old gonads..

Is this allowed?

Satire on Literotica? The negative reviews only indicate it was done pretty well. It could have been a little more subtle. But then cartoons and Quentin Tarantino don't do subtle either.

I wasn't going to make a public comment until I

I read the earlier public comments.

On a lot of them, I doubt they really read the story. More like skimming it for the sex, when it wasn't there they tried to figure out what they had read by what they remembered. But of course hadn't read.

There was a little Brit some years ago, Willie something, around 1920, a little earlier and through a lot of the 1920's. He was world Lightweight boxing champion. He weighed something like 118 pounds. He destroyed those his weight so fast he couldn't get a fight, even with those heavier than he. He fought some wonderful fights against world ranked middleweights. So he toured the US to get fights and make money. His agent going into town ahead of him and setting up the fights with local heavy weights, with a big plug ugly traveling with him who showed up at the weigh in. Then Willie would show up for the fight and knock the snot out of whoever was being touted the local champion. He even fought some of the Heavyweight contenders.

So the idea a little man can't take a big one is ignorant. Happens all the time. Of course, unlike Willie most such matches aren't fought by Marquis of Queensberry rules. But the little man is quick, quick, quick. And nasty!

I liked the story, but wasn't surprised at the comments.

Stupid story

Sorry, this story was just stupid.There was no one you could like, The 340 lb thug, the slutty blond wife or the wimpy little fighting terror of a husband.They all seemed like pretty sleazy people,especially the couple who go to a sex party to see what will happem. the Ct. Yankee

say what?

hard to figure this one out. sounds like husband has a real Napoleon complex and wife is there to help feed it. wife eggs a big guy on so her much smaller husband can enjoy kicking his ass (visciously,i might add). no 'good guys' in this story.

Again a terrible story

I can not believe what is getting postged in this section in the last few days

Huh!

The issue should not be whether one man can humiliate another (but I guess that was the point of this story). Is this a game where this couple hunts jerks to taunt and beat up? If so, then how are they any different than the jerks?

I re-read the story twice. First they were to stay together but she takes off with Bart when they first get there. Then she dances with Bart and let him grope her in front of her husband. Finally she says

"No! Bobby, I'm just starting to have fun, we came here to have sex and I haven't had any yet. Bart says he wants to fuck me silly. I want his big cock."

Finally she set up the challenge between her husband and Bart. I do not get it. The place was a gathering for swingers so naturally Bart gets pissed when the husband hangs around (which does not excuse his disrespect to the husband).

Bottom Line: The wife is a tease, the husband is a bully since he knew he could beat up the guy and Bart is a jerk. This is clearly a fantasy because the word would spread about this couple and they would be banned from these gatherings.

SleeplessinMD

Great Story!

Thank you, it was the perfect antidote to all of those ghastly submissive husband stories. I was about to stop reading, (I hate those things), but I pushed on and was delighted. I roared with laughter!

Awesome

I get bored by so many stoires that have a similar plot. This one is different. Now, the only thing, will end this story perfectly, is to talk about how the wimp husband punish his slut wife by his modified gigantic cock and make the big guy to be his slave.

Nice..

..twist on the usual wimpy cuckold husband type of story. It's obviously something readers love or hate - the fact that it provokes such extreme and opposite reactions speaks for the power of the story.

wasnt sure

i'm just going with a 50, because i'm not sure if it was a good story or not. i read all the other comments, and i feel that most people are just dumb, and wanted to complain about a story they didnt like.

at first i liked the story, it didnt turn into some little guy watching his wife fuck a big dick. i liked the idea of the little guy standing up for himself, until the twist came that the whole thing was a set-up.

it is a jerk move to go to a swingers party just to beat some guy up for trying to get with your wife; even if it were reversed, and the huge guy brought his wife to a party and she started dancing with a small guy.

and i think there was just too much crap at the end that muddle the idea. the wife mentions a sign that the husband could've given, and she was worried that he would've really left. it just made it suddenly seem like everything wasnt in control from the beginning, and i think that's what made a lot of people give low scores.

that sucked

dude get real, what a waste of reading!

Not my cup of tea or anything

I'm sorry, I feel this being a setup the pair is no better than the jerk that got beaten up, in fact I feel the hurt given out was excessive, the intentions vindictive and BASE!

Not like your other stories Eagle!
sorry

John

Rubbish

Man, I know sometimes what you write can be shit, but nonetheless it is normally enjoyable shit that is so implausable that it still leaves a smile on my face. But this is just down and out crap, so far below what you are capable of that I can only conclude you were in an alcohol induced daze when you wrote it. While I'm at it, when something is lost the word is spelt LOSE, LOOSE is the description of your clothes after you lose 45 pounds on your diet.

these 2 are fucking sick

for being swingers in the first place and getting off on hurting others, this is just goddamn worthless bullshit writing

You gotta be kidding.

Your stories are usually prety good but this is sicko. Not up to your usual quality writing. Did you write this with a hangover?

This could have been a great story...

Sorry it just would not happened in this fashion...

the only thing missing...

was for her to comment on how his monstrous cock would have been more pain than pleasure. That would have added some realism to the story. Of course I would have liked it better if she didn't realize he was so tough and he tossed her to the curb afterwards or rammed a baseball bat up her to see how she really liked it or....Pistolpackinpete

Good twist! I was dreading it for a moment there cos I hate cuckold tales where wimps have to eat another man's creampies out their wife's pussies!

In real life it would be risky with the weight differences, but certainly not impossible to beat someone much bigger and heavier. You would have to avoid getting wrestled, and instead punch or kick them where it hurts (eyes, temples, nose, kidneys, liver, neck, throat, major leg muscles, etc) and incapacitate them really quickly. I doubt an air-serviceman knows all this though, because it is much less close up fighting in real life (bar special forces).

I think they get off on this gig because they know that these punks would prey on other people with real wimp husbands (haha) so they prey on these punks in turn. I can't justify this but neither can I criticise this.

I'm guessing that he knows his limits and the wife would get the 'signal' to actually leave. It does involve a lot of humiliation at the start though, which most people can't stomach.

I doubt the police would prosecute guys who beat up assholes, haha.. The only thing that stretches belief is a guy who weighs 340lb and is 6'10". I don't see them around often, and I'm sure that such a person is a fat shit (BMI around 34 is surely obese)... on the other hand it would explain how he gets beaten so easily.

Sorry, you lost my vote on this one

I do know what you were doing when you wrote this, I realise, like anybody would, that you were just playing for the catch at the end, even if it weren't all that hard to guess what it would be, but...

Up till the end, you had a bad wife, a hubby who was a little more than meets the eye, and an asshole who got what he deserved.

Then you made hubby into every bit of the bad guy in this too.

So they go out to swing clubs (those ones where they DON'T try and protect their members from predators and assholes... oh yeah, THOSE clubs are everywhere!!!) and find the local bad guy, in order to trick him into being assaulted and turned into dogmeat? Who is the real sadist? The wife or hubby?

You made your characters into sorry, sick freaks.

And by the way, the wife will ditch him the moment he gets his ass handed to him... she is obviously there for the power trip of the bull fight, and sees herself as the prize, so she cannot really respect him.

To the winner, goes the spoilt bitch

Probably already given him the clap, seeing as she thinks she's such a devious player.

1 star, sorry. I have rated others of yours 5, but not this one

What a Pair

For those who think the wife was unfaithful or disrespectful to the husband, think again. That was all an act to set up the big guy and make him willing to play their sick little game. A husband and wife who go around setting up guys for the pleasure of the husband giving them a beating is not my idea of a nice couple. Even though the big guy probably deserved a put down, the actions of the couple made this another story with nobody to like.

Sorry, I have to give a low score on this one.

Seems like a sick game to play.

This was an intentional setup by the wife. Does the husband have to prove himself over and over and over again? The writing was clever, and the story had a good twist, but I would not want to ever know such a couple.

Crap

One day this mini John Cena is going to run into someone who is better than he. Then what do the loving wrestling couple do? Lousy.

turncoat

he sucked a tumescent cock, his cornhole reamed, betrayed!

what a wife setting up her husband and another man

the tramp needs to be ditched. let her go find her big dicks

Size !

An interesting game this couple play.
In real life they will meet a guy who is big, muscular, non arrogan, AMD good a fighting.

Then little Mrs wifey will get fucked !

Ha,ha

sick

sick but well told.

Dumb ass game

And one day they'll come across someone that will either kick her husband's ass or kill him. A dangerous game of Russian Roulette that someday will get them seriously hurt.

Just plain fun.

This story was slapstick funny.

Hilarious

This was a funny little flash story.

popular story

GT, considering how many commentators hated this story , it seems to remain popular after what, five or six years since you submitted it.

Yeah, we all enjoy daydreaming about being mild mannered Clark Kent, instantly ready to go whoopass on some big ape with our hidden Superman persona.

Interesting how a FICTIONAL story, with FICTIONAL characters, engaging in FICTIONAL activities and a FICTIONAL resolution can continue to draw such raw emotional responses. You guys need to get your hormones under control.

Agreed - just plain fun -

He proves the axiom never underestimate your opponent - there is ALWAYS someone faster., smarter, meaner, etc -

Not a fun evening, sometimes.

Had a friend whose wife liked to drink and get him into fights. He was pretty handy and won, mostly. One night she was playing her regular game, promised to fuck someone else, then threw it in her husband's face. He fought the guy, got stabbed twice, she got raped in the parking lot and nearly beaten to death. When he got out of the hospital he divorced her ass and found him a woman that didn't like that kind of game. Wife was so scarred from her beating that no one would have anything to do with her any more. Sometimes you get what you pay for and sometimes it's more than you expected.

Didn't think much of the wife in the story. Husband was stupid, too.

Divorce The Bitch

Although I cheered with every move The Wimp made, I totally detest the bitch. The wrong person got the shit stomped out of him.