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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust03/08/06

lovely

Loved the last stanza - pretty damn good (and the rest of the poem isn't bad either!)

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by My Erotic Trail03/08/06

passion write

I feel your words

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by LeBroz03/09/06

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All those things
We want and crave;
Once we've tasted 'em
Oh how our mouths water...

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