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by Anonymous

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by oregon_gal03/10/06

the line...

"leaking heart juice...." got to me. And i liked the arty fonts. nicely creative.

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by vampiredust03/10/06

Innovative

Pretty cool way of showing change within a poem, neatly done

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by RhymeFairy03/11/06

Hottter not colder ~

Yumm, what a way with words and brush !!
Love the flow and imagery. The emotion Curt is awesome.
I think that is what pulls me to your writing so much.
I can feel it, everytime !!

More more I say !!!
Stomps foot ! *grins

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by 03/12/06

Text effects

bring much more meaning to this write, in effect capturing all senses.

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by LeBroz02/03/07

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Curtis offers a pook at poetry through different eyes.

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by tazz31707/09/12

FOR NEVER BEING THE SAME

its so damned close, it aint funny. TK U MLJ LV NV

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