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Hard Liquor

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by My Erotic Trail03/10/06

excellent

perfect erotic poetry

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by RhymeFairy03/11/06

Oh My !!!

Hot lil pen here Blue. Very erotic and sooo sexy !!!
Makes me

Smooth talk twines
in warm drawn breaths.
Final words gasp
in shivering crests
of molten need.

Grrr ~~ Sizzling, and I aint just sayin so.
Gonna take a cold shower ~

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by LeBroz03/11/06

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A little hard liquor
And there's no telling
Where you'll wake...

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by dcpoet4403/11/06

seduced.....

and why not get relaxed with a bit of a nip.....nice......don

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fire down below!

hot write blue...
loved it very seductive and provacative!
~LB~

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