All Comments on 'Mr. Right? Ch. 07'

It just keeps getting better. I will be so interested to see how far their story goes. Hell, it could only get better.

This is one of those that you save for a rainy day so that you can masturbate to all day. Don't end it now

This series is so hot.Please keep it going.

Why couldn't you have just taken all these fragments and put them all together into a cohesive story instead of making me hop from one little vignette to the next? Jeez!

Yep - that's the way to do it! You gotta get more chapters in here soon, it's too good to stop now.

More, please! This story is way too good to leave us hanging!

i really liked where this one was going... any plans to update?

I love this story and couple. Any plans to update?

Great story,but is there more coming?

I am working on an update to this story right now. It may take me a bit to finish, mostly because I'm somewhat of a perfectionist and I end up changing chapters at least one or twice before I'm satisfied. But, happily, I've gotten over my forever long episode of writer's block with this story. Hopefully it won't come back and I'll be able to finish this story up. Thanks for reading me! (And check my profile for updates, I'll try to keep you all posted on my progress.)

I'm loving to story and I usually don't comment but umm that oral scene...yeah...that was nice...

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i love the interaction between the two of them. keep up the good writing. also glad that katy step aside to let staci and matt get together.

I love this story

Everything almost perfect, especially him pleasuring her orally--but simple biological fact is no man (no matter how much he wants) can harden right after like that--he needs 20 mins.

They are the electric couple for sure. Wow.