All Comments on 'Broken Mirrors'

breaking teh last tie but it may be worse and letting an old drunk with a temper beat you to death.

What do I say? I hated the story, but that is only because it felt too real. You truly can pull the reader into your work. Incredible...

Brian

almost scary in it's absolute command of a situation that has befallen too many women in a world that doesn't always care enough to fight for the truth. SK, I am a devoted fan. Fantastic work.

Reading some of your stories is like being on an emotional rollercoaster. The raw anger, resentment, rage and what caused it nearly broke my heart.

I once heard a male voice coming from my daughters room and a locked door. I went through the door and chased that kid out the window and two blocks down the street in my bare feet and robe.

The Daughter, when I returned was no where to be seen until I found her huddled in a closet, her look was enough.

A father's rage over a daughter can be unbridled at times and in this story, went way too far, especially towards the daughter.

Raising and nurturing a girl child is a very precious gift of nature until she begins to mature into a young woman and so many protective instincts come into play.

One cannot condone violence of that nature regardless of the emotional rage that sometimes overwhelms an individual and you present one side of this very well indeed.

Amicus...

its the inner self. TK U MLJ LV NV

She should have told the truth.

I am not a bitch so I could not relate.

She should have spoken up. She had a witness.