All Comments on 'A Story with Emotional Depth'

Really great story! It reminded me alot of my earlier days!! Very sweet and tender, and very erotic!

i like the mum of the story.. hope i have one that open-minded too...

I really loved your story. I think that the depth of the characters' feelings for one another came across very strongly. It was so much more satisfying than most of the 'Wham, bam, thank you mam' stories.

Well done!

i gotta play softball..thats where its at haha. love your stories, so hot

A nicely written story but I have a question. If Michelle locked her bedroom door, how was her mother able to walk in on them in the morning?

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Nice sample. Where is the rest of the story. Don't you think you should elaborate more. With just a sample you got me hooked. 5🌟's

GREAT story...loved them, and cool mom...