An excellent, good samaritan story with a truly loving couple and family. I really liked the grandma and grandpa loving the little ones so much and so quickly. It gives one a warm feeling! The money left me feeling apprehensive through the rest of the story. Kept thinking the drug dealers would be around.
A very good story. Thanks, DG.
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03/17/06
A very moving love story.
I like stories like this because they embrace so much. It cut through the races and I find that heartening too. Nice to see Esau depicted in the role of a caring father and husband rather than the normal 'literotica' role, though still tainted by the money and drugs. I accept the need for that tie to bond them together in the early stages.
As a romantic, I thought perhaps they might have turned their backs away from the money.
Very enjoyable and I thank you
Regards
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Anonymous03/17/06
Room for thought!
Your stories always leave room for thought, I mean that in a very good way. I put myself in your characters place and always ask myself What would I have done. Your stories are as good as come when reading on sites like theses. Whenever I see the name DG Hear, I have to read the story. I don't care what it is submitted under. If is't written by DG Hear it's worth my time to read it. I have never been dissapointed, disagreed with you many time but always find the stories intriguing.
With the highest of regards for your writing
Always a fan and an author also.
Your reader
I really enjoy your stories and I just LOVE a happy ending. This one did both for me!
Thanks for sharing your time, energy & talent.
by
Anonymous03/17/06
Citizenship
The story was good. The personalities were not explained enough to be a great story.
The one thing that should have been easy was Tia's citizenship. A child born of an American parent is an American citizen, no matter where they are born. They just can't ever run for president if born outside the USA.
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Anonymous03/17/06
More fun to read.
Nicely done. You do tell a good tale. You are in the top group of my to-read writers. When I see a story by you, I put other, less enjoyable stories to the side and delve immediately into your text.
Thank you for sharing your efforts and talents with us.
I've read and wrote a few storys in my time.This one touched me.Thank you and i'll look forward to more if and when you have time.
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Anonymous03/17/06
Yet
Yet another great story from DG.
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Anonymous03/17/06
Very Moving Story
DG this was one of the most moving stories I have read. Please continue with more of these. There is nothing like a good story with a great ending.
by
Anonymous03/18/06
Great Story!
A story of hope, honor and all of the important attributes a loving family can have in this life. Thanks for writing such a moving story.
SleeplessinMD
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Anonymous03/18/06
Sorry to break into the group hug, but....
...this wasn't a story. It was a diary. There was no conflict. There was no suspense. It just went on and on and nothing happened. And it was clear from the beginning that nothing was going to happen. Kinda dull.
BTW, nobody would have known what Esau's note in the jacket meant. But ANYBODY finding the note with the keys could just take them to the train station and collect the money. That was kinda sloppy.
You obviously have a following as you write English sentences well. But it would be more interesting if you had a story or two to tell.
Thanks for writing such an excellent story with all the family values we expect of a truly loving couple. I liked the informal format with just enough background on the characters to hold the tale together. I was uneasy over the ‘drug’ money, expecting the dealers to turn up and “upset the apple cart”, but alls well that ends well! Thanks DG for giving us yet another super, sweet tale. Pete.
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Anonymous06/11/06
liked it!
i enjoy your style of writing DG, have not been reading stories on this site for long but yours are some of the better ones. by the way if 'atlanta underground' had the story properly they would realise that the keys were not with the note!!!
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Anonymous10/01/06
GOOD DEEDS
KEPT UP THE GOOD WORK
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Anonymous10/01/06
ah, those good passive aggressive subservient
little Asian women! they are like little fire breathin' dragoness one moment but cuddly submissive wives and lovers the next to our big American Black and White men!
gosh, what a beautiful life, with such devoted and faithful little 5-foot tall Asian women!
Another great story I really loved the story and you really brought out the feelings in Mia Tia Chi Esau was smart to hide that money but Jake got lucky that the drug guys wasnt watching the terminal where the money was stashed at then they would have been nailed why didnt they simply invest the money into an off shore account that way it would accumalate more interest?
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
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Anonymous12/20/08
My Friend's Wife
This was a great story. I did not expected stories left on Erotic sites to be so moving, emotionally. In fact by the end of the story there was tear in my eyes. I Loved your story.
by
Anonymous04/06/09
aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
So nice to read about people who love each other numinus@yahoo.com
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Anonymous01/30/11
Poor at best!
To much description of unconnected information. I simply lost interest in the story.
Great job, I really like the sweet ending to a lovely story. Jake was a good guy and the lovely Chi, Tia and Mia were a wonderful addition to his somewhat sad world, lol! I wonder really about Esau, never really went in depth with what went on with the stealing but overall, I really love this story.
Another great story with yet another happy ending. Thanks!!
by
Anonymous02/10/12
Spelling
You need a spell checker!!! As an example:
At least int America she felt more protected thaen in her homeland.
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Anonymous05/11/13
This is the best story I have ever read on literotica!!
This stoty is a must read not just because of the love making but for the way two people can get bonded by true feelings beyond all humanly barriers... Love it!!
after taking care of his pals family..loved how it unfolded...clever man Esau to leave his jacket behind...if it was me I would keep the money too...turning it in would have brought a ton of shit down on them and possible retribution by drug barons...by spending it wisely they never drew attention to themselves...he was rich both in money terms and with a loving family too...life is very good....
English
The value of Friendship
Excellent story and a morality tale too.
Thankyou
Great story
Very good romance DG
Thank you
Up to your usual high standards
DG:
A happy tale to boot. You made this Horny 'ol Sailor ecstatic to see a happy ending to a great love story. Thank You. Ronnie W.
A wonderful life
An excellent, good samaritan story with a truly loving couple and family. I really liked the grandma and grandpa loving the little ones so much and so quickly. It gives one a warm feeling! The money left me feeling apprehensive through the rest of the story. Kept thinking the drug dealers would be around.
A very good story. Thanks, DG.
A very moving love story.
I like stories like this because they embrace so much. It cut through the races and I find that heartening too. Nice to see Esau depicted in the role of a caring father and husband rather than the normal 'literotica' role, though still tainted by the money and drugs. I accept the need for that tie to bond them together in the early stages.
As a romantic, I thought perhaps they might have turned their backs away from the money.
Very enjoyable and I thank you
Regards
Room for thought!
Your stories always leave room for thought, I mean that in a very good way. I put myself in your characters place and always ask myself What would I have done. Your stories are as good as come when reading on sites like theses. Whenever I see the name DG Hear, I have to read the story. I don't care what it is submitted under. If is't written by DG Hear it's worth my time to read it. I have never been dissapointed, disagreed with you many time but always find the stories intriguing.
With the highest of regards for your writing
Always a fan and an author also.
Your reader
Good
A very good loving wife story. I enjoyed this one
A double whammy!!!
I really enjoy your stories and I just LOVE a happy ending. This one did both for me!
Thanks for sharing your time, energy & talent.
Citizenship
The story was good. The personalities were not explained enough to be a great story.
The one thing that should have been easy was Tia's citizenship. A child born of an American parent is an American citizen, no matter where they are born. They just can't ever run for president if born outside the USA.
More fun to read.
Nicely done. You do tell a good tale. You are in the top group of my to-read writers. When I see a story by you, I put other, less enjoyable stories to the side and delve immediately into your text.
Thank you for sharing your efforts and talents with us.
Mo
I've read and wrote a few storys in my time.This one touched me.Thank you and i'll look forward to more if and when you have time.
Yet
Yet another great story from DG.
Very Moving Story
DG this was one of the most moving stories I have read. Please continue with more of these. There is nothing like a good story with a great ending.
Great Story!
A story of hope, honor and all of the important attributes a loving family can have in this life. Thanks for writing such a moving story.
SleeplessinMD
Sorry to break into the group hug, but....
...this wasn't a story. It was a diary. There was no conflict. There was no suspense. It just went on and on and nothing happened. And it was clear from the beginning that nothing was going to happen. Kinda dull.
BTW, nobody would have known what Esau's note in the jacket meant. But ANYBODY finding the note with the keys could just take them to the train station and collect the money. That was kinda sloppy.
You obviously have a following as you write English sentences well. But it would be more interesting if you had a story or two to tell.
The good have the reward
It is good to read of good actions and decent people being rewarded occasionally!
The stori was fine by me!
Thanks DG
John
A story of hope and honour !!!!
Thanks for writing such an excellent story with all the family values we expect of a truly loving couple. I liked the informal format with just enough background on the characters to hold the tale together. I was uneasy over the ‘drug’ money, expecting the dealers to turn up and “upset the apple cart”, but alls well that ends well! Thanks DG for giving us yet another super, sweet tale. Pete.
liked it!
i enjoy your style of writing DG, have not been reading stories on this site for long but yours are some of the better ones. by the way if 'atlanta underground' had the story properly they would realise that the keys were not with the note!!!
GOOD DEEDS
KEPT UP THE GOOD WORK
ah, those good passive aggressive subservient
little Asian women! they are like little fire breathin' dragoness one moment but cuddly submissive wives and lovers the next to our big American Black and White men!
gosh, what a beautiful life, with such devoted and faithful little 5-foot tall Asian women!
A Very Moving Story
Another great story I really loved the story and you really brought out the feelings in Mia Tia Chi Esau was smart to hide that money but Jake got lucky that the drug guys wasnt watching the terminal where the money was stashed at then they would have been nailed why didnt they simply invest the money into an off shore account that way it would accumalate more interest?
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
My Friend's Wife
This was a great story. I did not expected stories left on Erotic sites to be so moving, emotionally. In fact by the end of the story there was tear in my eyes. I Loved your story.
aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
So nice to read about people who love each other numinus@yahoo.com
Poor at best!
To much description of unconnected information. I simply lost interest in the story.
Sweet action and hot lovin'!!
Great job, I really like the sweet ending to a lovely story. Jake was a good guy and the lovely Chi, Tia and Mia were a wonderful addition to his somewhat sad world, lol! I wonder really about Esau, never really went in depth with what went on with the stealing but overall, I really love this story.
I can't wait for more work from you. LOVE IT :)
I loved it!
Another great story with yet another happy ending. Thanks!!
Spelling
You need a spell checker!!! As an example:
At least int America she felt more protected thaen in her homeland.
This is the best story I have ever read on literotica!!
This stoty is a must read not just because of the love making but for the way two people can get bonded by true feelings beyond all humanly barriers... Love it!!
Pleasant story with nice results
It is always nice to just find a nice to read story and have it go well LOL
Brave Heart
A very nice and gripping story. A friend's promise fulfilled with grace.
a very good story of blossoming love
after taking care of his pals family..loved how it unfolded...clever man Esau to leave his jacket behind...if it was me I would keep the money too...turning it in would have brought a ton of shit down on them and possible retribution by drug barons...by spending it wisely they never drew attention to themselves...he was rich both in money terms and with a loving family too...life is very good....
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