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Trey Ch. 10

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by Anonymous03/17/06

The love that created a bond

I understand the love that exists between two people because I met the wife I have now while we both were going through trouble relationships back in the 80s. We got married almost 25 years ago and now I love her more and more as each day go by. Good things happens when two people reach for the same goal and destiny in life. I hope that your love for each other will continue to grow and prosper more and more each day. As the years go by you can look back and say Thank you God for letting us make the right decision and protecting the love that was bound for us.

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by Anonymous03/18/06

Perfect...

...ending to this wonderful story, one of the very few that deserves the categorisation of "interacial love" rather than jus "interracial sex".

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by Anonymous03/18/06

Oh how joyous

"Still hoping to find that deserted stretch of lush, vibrant greenery where foam-crested waves crash against the weathered grey of ages-old rock, sending a spray of misty rainbows spiraling through the air...droplets of magic encasing me, embracing me, transporting me to that special place where I can be with that special someone, while the rest of the world just dissolves away... "

The authoress's bullshit fable is just like this story of betrayal, by a wife and a "friend."

Her description of perfect bliss is a god damned black with a 12" beer can sized cock telling her to get on her back and fuck all of his bros. The two worthless sons a bitches deserve one another. She will be true to Trey until another black worthless scoop of shit comes along with a bigger cock, and takes her away from Trey.

Earlier in the story when he shared her with his bros, he showed the reader what a worthless fucking nigger he was. That is the point where he ceased being just a black man and became just another god damned nigger. She was a fucking tramp from the start and when she fucked his bar buddies, she became nothing more than another black cock slut that would have fucked a barn full of shetland ponies if "Trey " had wanted her to.

Not a love story in any stretch of the imagination. Just another white married whore that loved to fuck around on her husband with a god damned nigger.

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by stormyroses03/29/06

Not sure whether to grin or grimace

Well, miss chocolatecherry, you certainly have incited a lot of tempers. Not that I'm saying that's a bad thing; people tend to be more honest when they're mad, and honesty is generally a good thing, even when the opinions are, IMO, painfully ignorant.

It took me a while to read this - it was only six months ago that my so-called close friend slept with the love of my life, and cheating is still a tender area for me. Nevertheless, staying with someone you don't love is not an option, especially when you've found someone you DO. So I was happy when I read the ending. I think she'll be happy with Trey, and everyone deserves happiness - yes, you guys, EVERYONE. Even people who do things that you don't agree with.

A very nice story, and as well-written as always. Not as piercingly beautiful and erotic as "Steam'd" - but then, probably nothing ever will be, in my book. ;-)

Do continue to write, please!


~Rose

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by Anonymous05/04/06

Glamorizing A Cheating Whore Isn't A Positive

This was a friend of hubbies forget the color. Divorce then fuck around - don't fuck the man who has married and taken care of you for 17 years - roof food clothes etc.

You showed no respect for a man nor yourself in this sick glamorizing dispicable cheating without a care for what preceeded her lover - his best friend - sick crap ladie!

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by Anonymous05/10/06

Thank you!

Thank you for writing 'Trey'. This really is the perfect ending to a perfect story, and written very well.

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by Anonymous09/16/08

The BEST ever!

This was the absolute best story every. All 10 chapters were perfect, leaving me wishing I had someone like that! Keep writing!

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by Anonymous06/12/09

dribble

the happy ending for her and the illusion of a marriage. it seems she left her husband years earlier, and it did not matter if trey was black, white whatoever. there was this unhappines and i did not pick up what she did to change it.
(i scanned ch 1 and read 9&10). the only honest thing she did with the husband was ask for the divorce. curious how he was permitted to be her meal ticket, for the selfish cow. given HER deception to one, trey could find a cheating wife ...once a cheater... why did she even marry husband, except for someone to take care of her?

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by Anonymous06/23/09

Let's pretend this were a *real* story

If so, by now, this poor, middle aged, cheating White woman would be mostly wrinkled, pimpled, exhausted looking from having to fuck with Trey's former and current NFL friends and acquiantances daily and weekly, in which large amounts of human saliva and seminal fluids of promiscuous men and women are deposited in or injested by this exhausted looking White woman... her once cared for and loved face and over-all body --- when she still had her poor cuckold husband, a decent man who loved her well and honestly and worked so she could live well --- are all bruised, brown, diseased...

But, of course, she would still say this is a dream came true for her and Trey, a person whom she likely doesn't live with any more, who probably didn't want her any more, since there are much younger whores with more toned body muscles to masburtate with are readily available...

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by Anonymous07/19/09

Oh well

Just to say its a bit of both after reading threw the whole story. I can understand the woman losing her feelings, especially when they dont talk to each other. I think it is disgusting that a 'best' friend would do this, regardless. You hear it all the time, bros before hos. Whatever, either way good read, hope it gets you to write another long story!

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by Anonymous07/31/12

Ons would have hope the cheating whore would have go AIDS from trey and died. Maybe if the cheating slut would have physically ficked her husband lioke she did the low life nigger she wuld have discovered she loved her husband. ANyway she will get hers all balck do is turn those cheating white cunts in to crack whoresand use them to make money so they can set around being porch monkies inn the ghetto

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by Anonymous11/03/12

Horrible

Even Samuelx write better stuff than that...

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by tiger4605/23/13

Jamie

is the stock gay guy

The whole series was utter crap.

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by Anonymous05/23/13

hubby should find his buddy and pop a few in him to make sure he don't do that to any other wives!!!! just another prison fantasy bullshit story

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by Anonymous12/16/14

So this is a learning experience for the husband?

You can't be serious:

"... and hoped that if he married again, he would learn from this, and take the time and effort to ensure that the love didn't die, as it had this time."

I think the only thing the husband learned is that his ex-wife is a horrible person. Yeah and Trey must really love her, how do I know this? Who doesn't want to share the woman he loves with a half dozen of his friends?

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